DUDE that was amazing, ususlly ppl face ron as the homophobe and hating Draco and everything and this was a nice way around that whole thing Report Review
It's like a history book. "This year, this happened. This year, that happened. Blah blah blah." So basically, pretty boring. The story is interesting, and it could've been great, but it needs more to it. Not just this happened, that happened. Report Review
gasp! draco malfoy?! intense! good job! 10/10! update soon!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94 Report Review
Yes!!! Yes!!! Yes!!! I have been waiting for a very good shonen-ai around here. Write more or feel my anger.
Draco/Ron fanAuthor's Response: thanks for your review! and don't worry and i am almost done with my second chapter and i hope to post it soon. i don't want to have to feel your anger. Report Review
Ooooh, this sounds like it's going to be a facinating story!
I liked how you explained Ron's behavior leading up to the Yule Ball. It was very interesting, and not something I ever would have thought of.
One thing I noticed, I think it's just a typo, but instead of "Great Hall" it said "Freat Hall" somewhere.
If you need suggestions of where to go...hmmm...well, for one, it will be very interesting to see how Ron and Draco deal with this night. Also, how far will this follow cannon? It can only go to a certain point...unless Ron's feelings never come out and he marries Hermione to appear "normal". Another thing is how Ron manages to hide his feelings from his friends, or does he tell them. How does he and Draco figure things out, if they ever do? What about Draco's attitude towards Ron? The possibilities are endless...
I hope that helped some.
Please, DON'T STOP THIS STORY!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you like my story. I'll look into that typo and fix it. I really appreciate your suggestions. And don't worry I don't think I'm going to stop the story. Report Review
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