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Review #1, by The Line Between Love and Hate Betrayal

11th June 2008:
This is not complete, you have to say what he did or it's no good; or at least put if she stay or goes. I was going to give a seven or higher, but theres no ending. This is a scene from a story, not a oneshot. So please finish it or turn it into a short story.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel this way, but I assure you it is finished. I wanted to leave an element of ambiguity to this story, I felt it gave it slightly more meaning.
Thank you.


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