nice. Very nice. When you were writing it, did you find it hard to picture Harry and Ginny old. Cause I found it hard to.Author's Response: Thanks. Yes and no. When I write, I rarely picture what is going on, I just picture all the words that create a picture. If that makes any sense at all. Report Review
this is a really moving story i cried for ages i just loved this storyAuthor's Response: Thank you. It is always nice to get feedback. Report Review
wow. that story was AMAZING! great job!!!Author's Response: Thanks! It is always nice to get good reviews like this. Report Review
Brillient! Its so great, I love it! Fantastic job!Author's Response: Thank you. Iâm really glad you liked it. Report Review
That was really good, only one problem you misspelled gryffindor. Don't worry I always do the same to Slytherine.Author's Response: Ah! I always do that. I will have to fix it sometime when the line for submitting stories is not such a long wait. Report Review
very sweet:) you've written it beautifully...I especially loved the Harry proposing Ginny scene. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. In my opinion, it is not great. The story certainly has improved from how I originally had it though. Report Review
Like how Harry said he was at Kings Cross in the Seventh book, but he did not board the train, but Ginny did. Right? That may not have been it, but it was there and I love this story.Author's Response: I guess it is similar to Harryâs experience. I did not originally come up with the idea of this to be like Kings Cross, but maybe my subconscious did.
Thanks for the review. Report Review
This is a beautiful story!! Report Review
Thats sweet its just like Harrys ride on the train in hpdh Report Review
can I translate your one-shot for an italian site? indicating who is the author!Author's Response: Go ahead. =) Report Review
I have to admit, your not scared to kill off a character. I cant say thats a bad thing though, because it really adds reality and depth to the story. In the end though, I was in tears.
I really loved it all,
every ounce of it.Author's Response: I think it adds more effect when a character dies and in most stories, people make all the characters live happily ever after, when in reality, it's not like that at all.
Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is a really lovely piece. The idea of boarding what must be the Hogwart's Express for that final journey with peace waiting for her at her destination is so appealing.
Watching her life go by, looking out the windows of the moving train, is a beautiful picture. You have given Ginny's life a fullness with joy and sorrow along the way. I particularly like that she does not even bother remembering the war, because she has so many more important things to remember. Her final destination and her realisation of what has happened is beautifullly written.
This piece is a real high point in fan fiction. Keep writing. Report Review
OMG that was so good. I'm giving it a 10 out of 10 only because that's the highest I can give. Report Review
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