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Review #1, by xX mOoNdAnCe Xx The Pale Imitation Of A Basilisk

31st May 2008:
Good start, I liked it! Your descriptions at the beginning were lovely.

Just a tip - try spacing your text a little better. Eg- put a line inbetween where a different character begins speaking to make it easier to read =]

Keep it up! =]

-Jessica-

Author's Response: thank you!
I love reviews and your tip was very helpful x


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