WOW it funny!!!
Great story !!! Report Review
I call this funny.
You can really dish out the shocks!
keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing! you think its funny! wow! keep reading! Report Review
Hm. . . . just thought about it some more and realised it could be a *not* amusing joke by george.
If so. . . . i guess this story is promising to be good!!Author's Response: Thank you! I just wanted to say that Rose is pretty easily convinced!~~!! Report Review
why would ron do that?!
im afraid you have gone a little beyond anything i deem believable in a story
but the writing is good so im giving you 9/10Author's Response: Hey.. im really glad that i have managed to shock you! thank you for considering me to be good~! and as for being believable, well, you just have to read on! Report Review
Amazing story! ..Absolutely witty, and stupid actions of george's.. and wonderfully funny. One of your funniest chapters, definitely-if not the best.Author's Response: Thank you, my surest critic and dearest friend! it means a lot to me when you praise a work! Report Review
So, like your previous reviewer, I'm thinking that George just didn't know the limits when to end the joke, causing Rose to run away like that. If so, poor Georgie will be on the suffering end of both Ron and Hermione's wraths. Poor bloke. Anyway, at least something good will come out of it! She and Scorpius get together! Whe-e-e-e-e-e-e-e!!!Author's Response: You will find that out very soon! Whaqtever it is, poor George is in for serious trouble~! And About Rose and Scorpius- well, they are destined to be together~! EEP!! Thanks a lot for reviewing! Keep reading! Report Review
ah ah, I suppose it's a koke of George, because I can't imgine Ron doing that. Very funny chapter, you let the envy to read more... I hope you're going to write more!Author's Response: Oh well.. that is the ultimate punchline and well, you will find out the truth when you read the next chapters!! i am going to write a lot more in this story! thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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