that was an interesting story, pretty original. job well done, sirAuthor's Response: thanks lol but im a girl xD Report Review
i loved it simply loved it, that is your special review for reviewing my story AND MAKING MY DAY HAPPPY!:]Author's Response: lol thnx *hugg* glad i could mak ur day happy Report Review
Wow, okay again this was really nicely written, you do capture emotion very nicely.
One thing is that this was super super fast, it was just like BAM! I love you.
Also the way you've structured it was slightly discordant.
Cute little fluffy Harry/Luna though, I enjoyed it =]Author's Response: lol thnx i know im still trying to figure out how to slow it down
thnx again for ur review Report Review
A very good, sweet, introspective story.
I'm not normally a H/L person, but this was very good. An interesting concept, Luna's mask.
Thank you, this was an excellent story.Author's Response: thank you very much for ur thoughtful review its made my day XD
and thank you for reading it Report Review
That was a cute little one shot, nice and fluffy. Just a note, try to start a new line when differnt people are speaking. It makes the story easier to follow.
Keep up the writing!Author's Response: thnx 4 ur review i'll get rite on that XD Report Review
really liked it cant wait 2 read ur nxt 1Author's Response: tanks kenny
ur praise is appreciated lol Report Review
Ohhh! That's so sweet!!! Thanks for the review on my story, by the by.Author's Response: Thanks no problem
im glad u thought it was sweet Report Review
I love it very much!
It was beutiful and entrancing!!
Go Luna and Go Harry!!
Rock on!Author's Response: thanks DA 4eva! glad u liked
it, roc on! Report Review
good, but I suggest you don't have the end "I love you lines" in the summary, then people have no reason to read it, they read it in the summary. Keep them a surprise for the end.Author's Response: thanks so much for ur review, thanks
also for the tip. Report Review
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