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Review #1, by Hope's Mom A Marked Woman

11th November 2011:
This story is great! I found it in the archives (along with its predecessors) and am sorry that it wasn't continued. I love Josie's slight(?) bouts of insanity! She seems to definitely get that from her two Aunts. The characters are lively and multifaceted - so much fun to read! In case you ever check back at this site please know that your stories are still being enjoyed -thank you for writing and sharing your talents!

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Review #2, by Vicki A Marked Woman

1st September 2011:
I'm in love with your story. It was totally different then what I have read previously, and I hope that you update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens in the lives of Jom Amy, Paige and others.

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Review #3, by felichia A Marked Woman

12th June 2011:
ahh, i love it!! you shoul totally write more :D

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Review #4, by siriuslyawesome A Marked Woman

24th April 2011:
come back come back come back! you need to finish this and the life and death brigade your stories are just too good to forget about!

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Review #5, by Crescent Moon  A Marked Woman

10th April 2011:
You need to carry this on!!

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Review #6, by onigirishi A Marked Woman

30th January 2011:
Awww im kinda sad to see that this hasnt been updated in a long while. Its just as entertaining as the sorta-prequel.

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Review #7, by try2imagine A Marked Woman

15th July 2010:
This story is amazing please, please, please update.

My complements,
Natasha

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Review #8, by Serendipityyyy A Marked Woman

15th May 2010:
i love this story!!! i read this story ages ago and i re-read just now and i forgot how amazing it is! the characters are witty and original and i love the dialogue! the only downside is that there hasn't been an update in forever! :( please update soon??

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Review #9, by peace_love_happiness A Marked Woman

10th May 2010:
no (this should be a long dramatic no, but the site wont allow the extra o's for some reason) . It seems I have come to the last updated chapter, and I am a very sad person. You should feel blessed: your two stories kept me company through the devastation of the Middle TN flooding in early May.I am very impressed with your original characters. Josie, Paige, and Amy are constantly cracking me up. Paige and Amy from the original story actually remind me of my best friend and me. I can't wait for the updates to this story!

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Review #10, by asyoulikeit A Marked Woman

2nd May 2010:
I have just re-read With Pleasure and I had forgotten how much it made me laugh. I then noticed that it has been almost a year since your last update; which never bodes well. I hope we havent lost you forever I know life often gets in the way of writing fanfiction; so I wouldn't blame you if you have gone forever. I just thought I should let you know how much I enjoyed reading your story (if you are still checking your reviews). I hope you do get back into writing With Pleasure as I would like to know what is going to happen and how you are going to sort out all the complications.
I have to say Jack is my favourite character and I do feel sorry for him unrequited love is tough.
I wish you luck in whatever you do, I hope you carry on writing even if its not this story, your talent would be wasted otherwise.

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Review #11, by Whisperer A Marked Woman

8th April 2010:
Love this story! It was a wonderful surprise the relationships develop in this story, akin to the way they would in real life. Nothing is rushed or hurried or sped along for the hell of it. There is a genuine rhythm. Love this and love "Say What?". Please update soon! :D

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Review #12, by Marlow A Marked Woman

29th November 2009:
I LOVE this story! Just read this and Say, What? in 2 days!

please update!!! please?

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Review #13, by miss_aurora A Marked Woman

23rd September 2009:
I can feel the sparks..
Alright, that one is such a random sentence. Anyway, although it's pretty calm at the moment, a bigger thing might occur sometime later,like the changing of their relationship, and I couldn't help but anxious about it. Frankly, I still didn't get what Jack's mom meant with leaving Jo's cheeks as it is, and such, but I bet it's just me. And Jack's 'secret' is something I'm curious of as well.

Thanks for writing and will be waiting for any future updates :D

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Review #14, by emilysoxo A Marked Woman

13th September 2009:
hahaha this is so funny but in a subtle way.
i love it!

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Review #15, by whacked A Marked Woman

2nd September 2009:
omg omg omg omg! update!
although, i did feel rather iffy about teh whole josie/jack kiss. it just felt weird. i dunno. and please, please, please dont let laine get with jack afterwards! its so cliche. and we must avoid cliches at all costs (as you have done with teh dress especially. i was almost in tears (happy tears) when i read she wasn't wearing some stunning dress that made her look liek a goddess)
9/10 because i didnt liek how that kiss was done. otherwise would have been 10. sorry!

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Review #16, by whacked Fall Right In

1st September 2009:
those boys are just cruel! how can they lock some one up in that godforsaken place! they make jack look like a lovely young boy who closes his eyes when he sees too much of a lady's leg (my little cousin and my brother - who is 12 and a half - do that when tehy see a girl in a bikini/underwear on tv. i don't know how they go to teh beach). so GR to GRyffindors! this is why i have a ravenclaw skin. 10/10 :) (im forgiving teh bad grammar) (for now)

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Review #17, by whacked Good Company

31st August 2009:
paige is someone i can very easily identify with, character wise (i dont live with my swlightly mental aunts. nor do i have random guys hitting on me all teh time. if only ... jks)
i have got to ask you to go over your stuff afterwards because there have been a lot of errors here and there, like missing "a"'s.
but overall, i really like this. partly because its funny (loved the bit with teh wands in teh carriages) and partly because i havent been able to fully predict teh storyline within teh ifrst 2 chapters. so yay you!
so 8.5/10 (that bad editing was really bugging me)

but jack is hilarious too! haha, i wanna be friends with him! (not in that way!)

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Review #18, by thisSHPWRECK A Marked Woman

29th July 2009:
I loved this chapter! You have a lot of witty lines that I enjoyed. Although this part:

“I’m taking myself out of the running and entering the supporting campaign. Just because I can’t be with Laine doesn’t mean she can’t be happy with someone else.”
“With who? And I still don’t know what you are talking about.”
“It’s a secret for the moment.”
“Tell me.”
“I’m a saint now Josie and a saint doesn’t reveal his secrets.”


confused me a bit.

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Review #19, by ruby_slippers A Marked Woman

27th July 2009:
simple revenge is more often than not the best sort. I enjoyed Josie having some lovely as well. In short this was a nice uplifting chapter that has left me eager for the "new years" up coming plot!

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Review #20, by RebelAngel A Marked Woman

14th July 2009:
Hiii!
Oh my god!
I l o v e t h i s story!

SERIOUSLY!
Update soon! I can't wait for Jo and Oliver to come together! Aah!
Update soon, please?

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Review #21, by Hilbilly A Marked Woman

10th July 2009:
well done good chapter :D it would be compliemnted perfectly if anoher followed though...

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Review #22, by SilverShadow04 A Marked Woman

7th July 2009:
Fantastic chapter! Was sad that was no meddling charge when the Josie/Jack kiss took place but I still have hope! Whether dillusional are not. Wonderfully fun chapter and I cannot wait for the next one.

Sandy

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Review #23, by Miss Chickey Pom A Marked Woman

4th July 2009:
Aw!
So Duke and Laine are going to end up together -nodnod-...
And then Oliver and Josie?
Yes..No..Maybe??
I don't know.
But adorable.
About time Josie got /some/ action. C:

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Review #24, by Moonlight Magic A Marked Woman

3rd July 2009:
lol i love this story! update please : )

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Review #25, by gitgit A Marked Woman

3rd July 2009:
awww that was a really nice chapter
and oo laine is jealous eh
that was definitely an interesting chapter cat wait to see how things develope now!

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