That. My friend, made me cry it was so good. or maybe that was listening to dido at the same time, well done though, great one-shot.Author's Response: Ah, thank you! That made me feel fantastic! Report Review
Oh my gosh! That was so adorable! I almost cried! You are really talented. Keep it up!Author's Response: Thank you! Wow! Report Review
Aww, this is so sweet and sad. Very well written!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
That was so beautiful and so sad, lovely writing - although you wrote "Alice and me" instead of "Alice and I" at one point.
Neville's first sentence was so poignant, their characters were rendered perfectly exactly the way I imagined - although a mention of Neville's Great Uncle Algie would've been great. If you feel like editing (although I have no idea why you would) I'd add in that little bit, it just adds authenticity.
If you've got any spare time can you have a look at my story, as this was one of the best written stories I've read in a very very very long time.
You've efficiently converted me as I now have to read the rest of your work. 1000/10 (because it was 100 times better than I expected).Author's Response: Thank you very much! I realized that after it was validated and was very angry; in fact, it probably will be edited just to fix that bit, but not until after Christmas, as I've got some newer one-shots to post first. I'll also work in Algie; I didn't think of him while writing, although that makes since, since we have limited knowlegde of Neville's family and should use all we've been given.
I'll check out your story as soon as I have a minute (my parents think I'm writing a report on Switzerland right now) and leave you a review hopefully as lovely as the one you've left me. :)
I hope you enjoy my other, less-gloomy stories as well, and thanks again for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Aw...Go Neville! Sad but sweet.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
"Where mama an' dada?"
Aww, I nearly cried.
I feel the need to write about the great life Neville will have now.
Great piece of writing, keep it up =]Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm so happy you liked it. Report Review
So so sad. Augusta always was portrayed as such a tough crusty old bird in canon. It was good to see your vision of her. Yes she was tough because she had to be strong, but she did love her family including Neville, even if his magic was a bit slow. The idea of Neville asking for his parents is heart breaking.
Keep writing.Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was hoping to show that she really did have a reason for her actions. Report Review
lovely- very well-written. :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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