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Reading Reviews for Birthdays and Heartaches
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DeaVanity Birthdays and Heartaches

18th August 2009:
Hello, reviewing as requested... :)

This was a very cute story and I loved it. Especially the canon stuff you so subtly put into it xD. Your Lily was great, how she thinks about James and Petunia...

I could have easily imagined the whole scene and that means that you did a great job at writing this one-shot.

It's sad to read something like this (happy, sweet) and then remember that those people died soon after.

~ DeaVanity

Author's Response: yeah it was kinda hard to write for the same reason but I think it did justice to that in the end :) and I am happy to hear that it was easy to imagine and that you like it :D

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Review #2, by Lily Birthdays and Heartaches

6th June 2008:
oh so sweet! Harry's sounds so cute!

Author's Response: :D hehe isn't he!

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Review #3, by stoirmeacha Birthdays and Heartaches

28th May 2008:
Wonderful. I loved the way you slipped canon into it with such ease, and how you characterised Lily. It was so sad to think that they only had a few more months to live. I loved the ending as well, it really exemplified the 'leaving like a lamb' ending, and you needed to say no more and no less. It was a really nice length as well, not too long and not too short. xx

Author's Response: Oh there was nothing easy about it lol actually took some effort on this one, much harder than Lineage and I have no idea why xD anyways thanks again for the review and I am glad you liked it :D woot!

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Review #4, by queen_luna Birthdays and Heartaches

25th May 2008:
Hi, this is queen_luna here to review as requested!

This one-shot was really really cute! I loved it! I like how you take all this canon stuff from DH (Bathilda Bagshot, the details in the letter from Lily to Sirius, the photograph of James chasing Harry) and turned it into a great story. I also loved the conversation between Lily & James. This was my favorite line: "Even though I’ve been married to him for almost three years, it still amazed me sometimes that such an immature toerag had become my beloved husband." Haha. Great job! 10/10


Author's Response: hehe yeah such fun :D and I am glad everything fit well :) oh and that you liked it!

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Review #5, by Malfoy_Lives_On Birthdays and Heartaches

24th May 2008:
This is WittleAna from the forums.
This was a very cute story. There were just some parts I HAD to smile at. I also liked the interaction between James and Lily very much. You made it cute and believable without making it like a cheesy family film. Kudos to you for that.
You do have some issues with commas in your story, so a beta might be helpful. Other than that, you did a wonderful job!

Author's Response: Yeah its not beta'd cause my beta is busy at the moment but that will be fixed soon hehe glad it wasn't overly cheesy :D

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Review #6, by xXmalfoysgirl4everXx Birthdays and Heartaches

23rd May 2008:
Cute! I like it :] It's a good fic, and the character is well put together. I like when you said Lily was trying to befriend Petunia, but of course Petunia wasn't. Definitely her character. The humor was there too, which was good for the setting. Good job! 10/10

-malfoysgirl aka. ron.weasleyxo on the forums

Author's Response: Yay glad you liked it and that people were in character hehe thanks for the review! :D

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Review #7, by Abi x Birthdays and Heartaches

16th May 2008:
Aww. It's soo cute! I Love It!

Author's Response: hehe thanks :D

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