I say its worth it. It sounds very interesting! Report Review
wow. its great. i cant wait to read the rest of it.Author's Response: thanks a lot :):) Report Review
Aww its a lovely opening well doneAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
Amazing story!I also love the story of romeo and juliet so please continue this storyAuthor's Response: thanks! and i will! Report Review
Your writing has a very good flow to it. Not many mistakes that I can see which is a definite plus. For this story, the perspective depends on how deep you're going to delve into the Romeo/Juliet thing with the drama and heartache and which character you want to experience it. Also, to many stories are Sirius/OC placed in the PoV of the OC, and it would make a very interesting change to switch it to Sirius' but I dont know how that would interact the rest of your story.
Dont kill this story yet. It's got some good potential.
BTW-- Loved the summary. Very intriguing.Author's Response: lol yeah i'm still debating which way to go... :| i'm so confused! but don't worry i'll sort it out and get this story going!!
thanks a lot! Report Review
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