I'm sorry to post this review here, but I'm really confused. Didn't you write the Blonde the Brunette and the Redhead? If so, where did it go, I loved that story and would enjoy rereading it. If not, sorry to bug you, this was a lovely one-shot. I never thought about what James was like before he loved Lily. :D Report Review
WONDERFUL (note its in caps!)...LOVED it...BEAUTIFUL language.and FUNNY TooAuthor's Response: Gosh gee thanks! =D Report Review
It was cute. And I love that his reasoning voice sounds like Sirius. I loved it!Author's Response: Thanks Aussie!
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Funny definately very funny keep it up. Lol, yes I agree he does seem to be a very odd person.Author's Response: Yes, James is VERY odd Report Review
i love it! its really cute and i liked the flashback. and dunno wat to say besides wonderful!Author's Response: heh heh thanks! Report Review
I had my friend read this as it sorta reminds us of someone
Fabulous story lol
HugsAuthor's Response: haha thanks! Report Review
ha this is funny, inside the mind of James Potter is a fun place to be.
10/10Author's Response: Well apart from the confusing thoughts and girly actions then yeah, fun fun fun hee hee!
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Your plot was quite nice but with an abrubt ending.I had strted to enjoy when it ended!Well,good work!Author's Response: I know it just sort of dropped off. It just came to me and I had to write it down so that's why it isn't spectacular!
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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