awww.. it the end already! i'm sad to realise that there will be no more chapters for me to read!
but it was quite a sad end...
i was happy, though, that you didn't give the story some cheesy end but kept it more realistic.
really, this will be a story i'll always remember..
loyal for ever,
fannaAuthor's Response: Im glad you liked it. I know it is sad but it seemed the only way for things to go. Please read some of my other stories if you are even interested. Forever grateful. Report Review
Is that du last chap?!?!Author's Response: Yes it is. Hope you enjoyed it! Report Review
omigod!! I don't think I've ever cried reading fan fiction before!! That was AMAZING! Report Review
Awww Sirius is in looovveeAuthor's Response: I know. Isn't he cute. Report Review
aw.. that was just so...sweet! she married dan, huh?
i always knew he liked her.. after all, jude wasn't the only one acting insane and voilent when she got together with sirius...
so, i guess i saw that one vaguely coming... although the thing with her baby was pretty sad.. and i wonder how dan will react to seeing sirius sleeping with his wife (mind out of the gutter).. :P
any way...i am so happy to see the first part of the ending up on the story page but i'm sad at the same time-- after all, this story is practically waving me good bye!
with you, till the end.
fannaAuthor's Response: "With you, till the end" That literally made we wanna cry. Thank you so much. I thought Dan was believable but not expected at the same time, a bit of a shock to the readers. And yes, I intended Monica to end up with a not so perfect life. But Im glad you like it. Also, if you're interested, I have started writing a new story. It is a Draco/Hermione and will be called Somehow. I hope to get it up here in a month or so, and I would love it if you would give it a chance since you're my loyal reader. Anyways, I'll have part two up shortly.
great story! i haven't read the next chapter but I'm guessing that both Jude and Sirius are gonna fall for Monica? ahaha:)Author's Response: Well . . . . lol :) Thanks for the review. Report Review
oh, man, this is heartbreaking.
i've liked jude more, all throughout the story but it still hurt to see all this happen.
it must have been a kick in the guts to hear that she was used for a bet... :(
and sirius-- he had finally fallen in love and it just had to end this way... but then, all sirius/oc storied have to end up seperating them to keep them canon.. :/
anyway, it's a blow to read that this is the last official chapter to the story! please end write nice long epilogue's.. :(
sad to see that all good things do come to an end,
PS: OMG!!! you dedicated such an IMPORTANT chapter to ME! man, that's wonderful! i always loved the way you appreciated the reviewer.. (like i said before, only some authors do that) but it was a different experience alltogether when i saw my username in th A/N! i'm honoured! =DAuthor's Response: You deserved the recognition, you motivated me to get this chapter up faster then I planned. And Im taking your review to mean you like the chapter, even if it was sad. Keep a look out for the epilogue! Report Review
hmmm.. what's with the blacking out and everything?
i hope she's ok... :S
sirius is really worried for her isn't he?
i dunno knw, but somehow i have a strange sense of foreboding everytime i think about christmas eve.
oh well, update soon unless u wanna get avada kedara'd in your sleep.
very hufflepuff but sometimes slytherin,
fannaAuthor's Response: I will update right now, just for you. And the next chapter is Christmas Eve! Report Review
i hate tiffany.
yup, i said it.
and i still love jude..
bt maybe, just maybe, i wanna read about the look on pad's face when he sees monica.Author's Response: READ ABOUT THE LOOK ON SIRIUS' FACE! lol Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
i still love jude and don't really like sirius..
why? i don't knw, it's just the way it is.
i'll just read on...
just wanted to leave a review ;cause i was feeling guilty for lazing off a couple of times.. :)
fannaAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Even just a few words makes my day. Report Review
man, i could almost SEE it happening!
but i'm glad she still had the sense to stop swooning and running away.
the prick needed it.
anyway... i'm reading on..
PS: you're chapter lenghts are improving!;)Author's Response: Thanks :). And Ya, Sirius needs a wake up call. Report Review
hmmm.. so finally monica get's some brains stuffed inside her head...
well, sorry, i can't type for long, my curiosity has always been my biggest weakness-- suspence really isnt my thing.. :)Author's Response: HAHAH! This review made me smile :) Report Review
is it wrong that i'm liking jude better than sirius?
is it bad that i feel really bad for monica everytime i remember that sirius is just triying to win a bet?
oh well, maybe my feelings will change as i read on..
happy writing and never feel discouraged!
PS: FINALLY! a chapter with a reasonable length!Author's Response: I know, Im bad for short chapters. :S sorry. But you're suppose to torn between Jude and Sirius, part of the plan. :) Report Review
man, i love the way i felt the butterflies too.. just goes to show that you write very convincingly..
and nice too see that pads is getting real feelings behind the bet.
PS: WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS!Author's Response: Im glad I could offer some sort of feelings with my story. :) Report Review
again, it's too short..
but then as you might have noticed-- i just added this peice of epicness in my favourites...
that just shows that i pathetically love this story no matter how many height problems it has..
i sincerely hope that monica doesn't let pads win his bet..
that would just be plain cruel!Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see :) Report Review
what with amazing writers writing teeny chapters?
how am i supposed to live of FS's if all the amazing stories are incredibly short??
but in case you missed it, i just fell in love eith your story...
and i'm VERY loyall to the stories i like..
PS: don't ya get disappointed. every good story get's it's fair share of reviews and appreciation eventually, if not immediately..
so don't ya give up!Author's Response: Thanks SO much :) Report Review
i guess i'll just read on and comment on what happens, as the story evolves.. :/
fannaAuthor's Response: Ya, this is just a set up chapter. :) Report Review
This is very good. I love it! I hope you have another chapter soon.Author's Response: I will. :) Report Review
sorry, that I didn't review on the last chapter. I thought I did but somehow I didn't...
Well but it was great and I'm glad, that Sirius stayed with Monica and not with Tiffany!
now to this chapter:
it was really nice, but now I am a bit scared! The beginning of the end of what? Their relationship? Or why is he acting so strange?
Well hope for more soon!
greetings, HannaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, and please keep reading! Report Review
Short but sweet! :))Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
Ohh I'm loving this story! You MUST update as soon as possible!Author's Response: Will do!! Report Review
Wonderful! Keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
I am addicted to this story! You really have to write some more longer chapters.Author's Response: Im glad you didn't think this chapter was to long. And so happy to see you like the story! I'll update asap!! Report Review
Frank! I love him! this was a good chapter.Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
I just forgot to say I really lik it and miss.perfection you should update it!Author's Response: I will. No worries. Report Review
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