well done, I've never thought of tom like that
a new perspective
bloody brilliant

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I noticed a few things that were a little inaccurate, and Tom seemed a little OOC... but he was at school, and people change a lot so maybe not OOC... sorry if this review makes little sense; it's the early hours of the morning.

Other than that, really well done :) It certainly worked well with the title! Thanks for taking up this challenge; I rarely find good Tom/OC one-shots; this was definitely great.

9/10 (:

Author's Response: Thank you very much, both for your review, and for the lovely challenge that inspired this fic. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I agree that he was slightly OOC, but I really can't fix it without wrecking the plot. Thanks again for reviewing, especially considering how early it was!

~Katie



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It is undeniably sad that this is only a one-shot for if you had continued surely it would be a smash hit. Therefore, I give you a 10/10 for all the work you had, wishing that many many reviews may be yet to come. And they will, believe me, but you have to find or create a banner. This has a lot of potential, though potential itself is not always discovered without a banner.
It is hard to believe, but true indeed. Hopefully you'll have a huge number of reviews in a couple of days. Tom Riddle fics are my favourites :) Thank you for writting this wonderful piece of literature, whose summary really caught my eye. ;)

Best Regards*

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it so much, and thanks for reviewing! I doubt I would have had the patience, time, or plot ideas to continue this, though. )= Sorry. I just feel that the ending is better this way.

And I am currently requesting a banner over at TDA, so it'll have a banner soon! Thanks for the suggestion and I hope that I get lots of reviews, too!

~Katie

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