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Review #1, by adluvshp Once Upon a December

12th December 2012:
Holiday Review Extravaganza Event Two

This was such a heartbreaking tale. I liked how you wrote this like a children's fairytale, the narrative was unique and interesting. Cho and Cedric were well described. The song fit in with the story theme very well too.

I liked reading this over all, it made me smile, and it made me sad. Good work :)

You did have some grammar and spelling errors throughout though, and some typos, like, you wrote, Harry and Cho came out of the maze, when I think you meant Harry and Cedric. I suggest getting a beta to read this over and fix your typos, misspellings, and grammar.

Apart from that, this made a smooth read.

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

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Review #2, by v Once Upon a December

12th November 2008:
this was beautiful. i love cho and cedric!

Author's Response: oh my god i'm so sorry! I haven't looked at any of my reviews in like, forever. And thank you so much. I didn't think it was that good, and i'm glad somebody does. ^_^
~Annie


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