Ive always been a fan of Snape/Lily, and this makes me love it even more!! Report Review
wow really good, it shows snapes emotions well.
And I absolutly adored the James and Lily settings, very romantic.
10/10 Report Review
aww, that's so sweet. i like how you tied it all together, with the falling thing.. Report Review
Beautiful. I'm crying. Not openly sobbing, but silently crying bc this was so pure and beautiful. Thank you for writing this--it made my day worthwhile.
--Kate/RPAuthor's Response: Awwh ty ^.^ Report Review
I loved it, it was really sweet and a sad... Sad about Snape, poor him!Author's Response: Thanks soo much!! ^.^ I love Snape hehe x Report Review
I really don't know what to say!! That was the sweetest, but saddest one-shot ever. I have never read anybody write Severus like that, it was beautiful. The part about the flowers was a wonderful touch, and the last sentence was pure genius. I really am in love with this story. Utter perfection.
infinity/10 - no joke.
~Luna xAuthor's Response: You are officially my favouite reviewer!! :P
Thanks so much! I like writing one-shots :) I'd never written a Sev/Lily fic, and I fancied giving it a go.
Cheers! x Report Review
so sad, but so sweet. excellent writing. :)Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Report Review
Aww, poor Severus =(
Surprise surprise, I still love the way you write =)Author's Response: Thanks so much :)! Aww I know. Report Review
Oh! sniff sniff! dat was a sad cute
lil story luved it!Author's Response: haha thanks, I'm glad! x Report Review
awww wow that was so sad but sweet all at the same time hehe
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That was quite heartbreaking, but a lovely read!
I am always torn between feeling happy for James and Lily and sad for Severus, and you have captured his desperation and sadness so well in this piece it is hard not to evoke sympathy for him, and his unrequited love.
Well done!Author's Response: Thanks so much! (:
yeah same here, actually. eech, he made bad decisions didn't he? Thanks again! x Report Review
Extremely beautiful. Welll written, amazing.Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Report Review
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