Well a great story with a very good theme. Waiting for more.. -:)Author's Response: Dear Avinash, Thank you for the review and welcome to my story. I'm working on the next chapter it's just that its going slowly. I'm half way through it and I will post it as soon as I can. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Wow! I can't wait for more!Author's Response: Dear Becky, Thanks for the review and welcome to my story. I'm working on the next chapter at this time and I'll post it as soon as I can. Until next time, Marc Report Review
I really have enjoyed reading this story and I hope that you are going to be able to complete it.Author's Response: Dear Andieco, Thank you for the review. I'm working on the next chapter at this time. I'll have it up as soon as I'm finished. Stay with me. Until next time, Marc Report Review
please write the next few chapters!Author's Response: Dear Potterhead, I'm trying. I've run into writers block. Stay with me, I'll get there. Thanks! Until next time, Marc Report Review
this is so good!!! if you hadnt already this would be an awesome sequel to the harry potters. i really like the other storyline with bonnie and daniel. they are really brillant wizards and you have written their characters quitte well. please continue!Author's Response: Dear Lyra, Thanks for the review. Welcome to my story. I always felt that JK should have written the 19 years to let everyone know what really happened. She didn't, so I feel that I have to. I'm in the process of writing the next chapter but I'm suffering from writers block. Stay with me there's more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
whens the next chapter coming?Author's Response: Lucie, Thank you for the review. I hope that you're enjoying my work. I'm working on the next chapter but it's coming slowly. Stay with me it will get here. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Finish this story PLEASE! Really enjoying.Author's Response: Dear andieco, Thanks for the review. Welcome to my story. I'm working on the next chapter and should have it up soon, stay with me there's a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
It has been so long. Over a year since I had checked, at least there was a new chapter. I can not recall who is in Wroexter, but I am sure it will come clear eventually. Your way is certainly more interesting, but were I Harry, I think I know what I would do to keep Kali busy while they come up with better ideas. Since the statue seems solely focused on getting to Harry, excpet for dealing with any attackers that come in it's way, he need not stay close at all to the stautue. Since it took several days to walk across the English channel, get it back to the shore, then apparate to the French shore. A few days later, apparate back to the English shore. Let the statue keep walking back and forth along the bottom of the English channel where it can not hurt any one. If that is not long enough, there is always the Atlantic Ocean. Would help if they could put some sort of a tracker on the statue. That would not be insurmountable, it can not reach every part of it's body. For that matter, it is a large bronze object, muggle means could be employed to follow it under sea from the surface, side scan sonar would suffice. While effective, the problem is it would be boring. Hope your writer's block is easing. If you are like me, soon classes will be starting again. I should be working on my syllabi at the moment.Author's Response: Dear Doc, Thanks for the review. It's great hearing from you. That's a great idea, I hadn't thought of that. I'm going to be pushing her off of a cliff soon and I hope to keep her busy there. I've come up with how I'm going to get rid of her but I want to set it up correctly. Wroexter is where Camelot is thought to have truely existed in England. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
great chapter.Can't wait to see how you finally destroy the statue.Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Dear Potterblack, Thanks for the review and welcome to my story. I'm working on the next chapter and I hope to have it up as soon as I can. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
This story makes absolutely no sense and it sucks the plot's horrible and punctuation is far past terribleAuthor's Response: Dear 677, Thanks for your review. As they say you can't please everyone. I'm sure that there are other stories that you'll find to your likeing. Marc Report Review
I really enjoy the stories, but I have one question. Is there an overarching antagonist that connects each of the major plots? For example, in the original books, that would be Tom Riddle. If there is, I might suggest a little more foreshadowing and linkage between the plots. If there isn't, and this is just a series of "short stories" that continue the story of the characters, perhaps organizing into chapters or even different stories? Overall, I really enjoy the story you are writing. The characters have reasonably depth, the writing is good, and the storyline has decent complexity. Thanks!Author's Response: Dear 4297, Thanks for the review and welcome to my story. I'm glad that you're enjoying what I'm writing. If you look, you'll see that chapters 1-6 were used to finish up JK's story. Chapters 6-31 was the vampire plague. Chapters 31-38 was the Incubus attack, and chapters 38 on is the battle with Kali. I tried to introduce the next part of the story before I finished up the story's chapter that I was working on. The main thread was the continueing life of Harry and Ginny. I'll try to put a bit more into the cross overs from this point on. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Please tell me you are not abandoning this.Author's Response: Dear Fan, Thanks for the review. No, I'm not abandoning my story. I've been hard at work teaching. My school year has come to a close and the next chapter should be up in a few weeks. Stay with me there IS a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Ok...I NEED THE REST. I have really enjoyed this story.great writing. KimAuthor's Response: Dear Kim, Thanks for your review and welcome to my story. I'm in the porcess of writing the next chapter but it's going a bit slower then I'd like. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Marc, this is easily the best fanfiction i have read, 2nd only to J.K. herself. I'd like to know when the next chapter will come out and how much longer this story will be because i don't want it to end. -ThanksAuthor's Response: Dear Charlie, Thanks for the review and welcome to my story. Being compared to J.K. is great, thanks. I'm in the porcess of writing the next chapter and it should be out in a week or so. I intend on taking the story all the way back to the point on the platform that Harry and Ginny are saying good bye to thier kids. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Marc, Surprise!! I'm back. Did you miss me? Finally got my laptop fixed. I was thrilled to see the next chapter was up. I think it's time for the End of Kali. Refresh my memory what friend in Wroxeter? It's has been a long story. If anything the battle with Kali has brought the Wizarding World together. Outstanding! I hope you have the next formulated. TTFN FoMAuthor's Response: Dear Molly, Thanks for the review. It's good to hear from you, hope everything is well. I will end the Kali story in the next two chapters. There's more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Brilliant !! but way to short ( for me at least ! LOL) Cant wait for more ! DAVEAuthor's Response: Dear Dave, Thanks for the review. It's great to hear from you. Sorry it's taken so long but I've had writers block. I'll try to make the next chapters longer. Stay with me I'm not done yet. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Nice to see you back at it! A good set up chapter for stopping Kali. Have to figured out how you are going to kill her off yet? I can't wait to see what you come up with to finally stop her. Good job! ~HopelessAuthor's Response: Dear Hopeless, Thanks for the review. I'm back at it, I've come up with what I think should be an interesting method. It'll be out in a couple of chapters. Stay with me, there's more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Doesn't have alot to say about the investigation skills of the Auror Dept if the fact that all the statues were returned from repair before they exploded didn't set off any red flags... Really?Author's Response: Dear sylvelle, Thanks for the review. We can assume that they're not use to something like this happening. Harry did live with muggles as a child and probably watched English Cop shows at that time. All I can say is just please enjoy the story. There's more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Marc, I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story all over again. I loved the owls and the howler, but we are seeing a really unstable Harry - I like my Harry happy LOL ~HopelessAuthor's Response: Dear Hopeless, Thanks for the review. Harry, like any hero, has to go through hell before he can come out whole. Ginny and her parents are there to help him but he has to do it by himself. This will make him stronger in the end. Keep reading and you'll see. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Harry would not use an unforgiveable, even if it was being used on him. Remember he used a mere disarming spell agains Tom's AV and won.Author's Response: Dear Sylvelle, Thanks for the review and welcome to my story. I agree with you about the spell. I felt that the attack was so fast that Harry didn't want to take the chance of it getting by him and getting to Ginny. Remember he was alone when he took on Tom, (there wasn't anyone behind him). That's why I threw it in. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Stay with me there's a lot more. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Great take on muggles and how we get things done, the scene with Ron at the supermarket was priceless! I can just see his face. Oh and I looked up Missis and I stand corrected. I still wish you'd just pick one and stick with it LOL. ~HopelessAuthor's Response: Dear Hope, Thanks for the review. See you're not hopeless. HA HA "Sorry" I just had too. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I'll try and keep Mrs. in mind from now on. You'll see that in a future chapter Harry will just start to call her mom. But you'll have to read on to find that. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Okay, Okay!! I adore the story so much so I started over from the beginning but if I see Missis Weasley one more time I'm going cry. Missis is not a word - it's Mrs. Weasley.Author's Response: Dear Hopeless, Thank you for the review. Mrs. is the shortened form. It really is Missis. I'll try to use Mrs. in the furture, OK. I want you to enjoy your read. I'm working on the next chapter and it should be out in a couple of weeks. Stay with me, there's more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
As wonderful as the first chapter :3Author's Response: Dear Fred and George, Thanks for the review. I felt that JK didn't spend enough time bringing Ginny and Harry back together after the war. I felt that they needed to reconnect with each other. I'm glad that you enjoyed what I did. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
Are you sure you're not Rowling herself? This is brilliant and it's only the first chapter. I'm hooked. Second Chapter here I come :)Author's Response: Dear Fred and George, Welcome to my story. Thanks for the review. Enjoy and let me know what you think. Stay with me there's a lot more to come. Until next time, Marc Report Review
Wonderful to see a new Chapter, mate! I had about given up hope! Love this story to pieces and I always look forward to new chapters! That Kali is about as persistant as Ron Weasley at an all-you-can eat buffet! Can't wait for you to bring this to a magnificent crescendo!!!Author's Response: Dear Auror, Thanks for the review. I've missed all of my readers. I'm working on the next chapter now and hope to have it ready in a couple of weeks. Stay with me there's more to come. As always, Until next time, Marc Report Review
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