Great chapter .. james potter is evil :(:(:( .. sad :'(
ooo .. i need an update soon .. please !!!Author's Response: Thanks ... James is evil at the MOMENT, lol, there's a hint. I'll update as soon as possible. Report Review
wow!! It's about time sheesh!! lol good chapter!Author's Response: Hey it hasn't been that long, lol. Thanks Report Review
cute...ur story is really cute...
please continue...update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks, the update WILL be soon I promise, I'm just about to do it now. Report Review
i really like it,
great story, cant wait for more :)Author's Response: I know!
I'm glad you like it.
More will be coming soon, I promise. Report Review
i'm really enjoying this story, hermione and harry are just right for each other, 10/10.
will you be writing more of this story soon?Author's Response: I know, Harry and Hermione are just unbelievably perfect together. I'm SO envious. There'll be more of the story out soon. Report Review
haha. I like the ending of this chapter, cute and funny.
please update soon! Author's Response: Thanks, and I'll update as soon as possible. Report Review
i wasn't sure about this story at first from the summary. But it kept appearing so i read it and i have to say i'm really enjoying it so far. keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Thanks.
I'm not particularly brilliant at writing summaries but I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
harry's head over heels isn't he? Haha, wonder when they'll firgure it out. Screw his dad. =D good story!!!Author's Response: Yeah he is, lol, I'm sure you won't have to wait too long for them to get together. Report Review
another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see more!
And I now got a Neville!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Another good chapter.
And I think that it's awesome that you already have another chapter in the queue (did I spell that right?)
On another note: I got Cho Chang this time!Author's Response: Thanks you, and yes, you did spell "queue" right. Report Review
Another above average chapter. :)
On a completely different note:I have found the funnest game on this website. I am not logged in, so I have to prove I'm human by identifying Harry Potter Characters when I give reviews! I just got a Snape and a Dumbledore!Author's Response: Only above average? Ah well ...
I know, I've had a go of that game, it's good. Lol, I had a "Hermione" last time. Report Review
Pretty awesome first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Just a little thing (and it's definitely not needed), but you may want to insert a horizantal line break before your authors notes at the bottomAuthor's Response: Thanks.
The thing is, I haven't a clue how to do that as I'm reasonably new to this. If you're willing to tell me that'd be cool. Report Review
thi was so good!!!
please keep writing :DAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'll keep writing don't worry Report Review
This was NOT boring! I am excited for the rest! 10/10!Author's Response: thank u so much, the rest will be even more exciting I promise. Report Review
Wow! That was great! I was shocked seeing how James and Harry were treating each other! I never would have thought that would happen.Author's Response: Yeah, I turned that around a bit, this introduction is a bit ... boring, but I PROMISE the second chapter will be even better! Report Review
great start, i think i'll be really looking forward to the rest and beyond!
hehe anyways, 10/10Author's Response: Thanks, the rest will be AWESOME, I promise. Report Review
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