keep writing more its getting good...

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nice start i like it just keep writing ur doing great...

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Love it. Love it so much. (Yes, I have seen Hoodwinked. Love that movie. "AW-KWARD! LOL) I just added this as one of my fave stories!

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Hey, it's a nice story. don't worry about the grammar and spelling...it happens all the time. I mean, when i started The Tale of Two Potters, i was so excited i had some spelling mistakes...haha

very good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Keep up the good work on your stories!

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NOOO!

i... need... more... awesome... chapters to READ!

Author's Response: lol! You really think my chapters are that good? Thanks so much!

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I LOVE IT!!!

wow ur amazing!

keep up the good work!

Author's Response: can do! thanks for the review and compliment!
:)

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amazing story you've got the characters just right i love it and can't wait to read the next chapter i think you've got a talent!!! write the next chapter soon please

Author's Response: Really? Wow that is so awesome! Thanks so much! By the way Sirius, Remus, and Peter don't come in till chapter two, thats why you didn't see them here, and I'm thinking about writing chapter two in James's point of view. and I will update A.S.A.P.. Thanks so much for the review!

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Its really good you, spelled snivellus right. But I think James should have grown up a bit more by now and that snape should be trying to get lily back

Author's Response: I did? Cool! James IS going to grow up more in the next chapters. He's just really nervous around Lily. And as for Snape, I thought he would complicate things with Lily so I had him hating her. Hey, it's my story! lol.

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i thought it was really sweet!! i think you got the characters totally spot on :)
you probably put too much description in the dialogue tho, which makes it look a bit unnatural
overall it's fab!!

Author's Response: lol! You accidentally posted this comment twice!

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i thought it was really sweet!! i think you got the characters totally spot on :)
you probably put too much description in the dialogue tho, which makes it look a bit unnatural
overall it's fab!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was awkward in some parts too but i didn't know what else to put. Guess what? You're my first review! This is so awesome! You rock!

By the way, you can usually expect me to update A.S.A.P. unless i'm on vacation (Don't want to keep my readers waiting!). But right now they aren't letting any writers(except 'trusted writers')post anything, so it might be awhile.

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