Aww, god, that's sad. They're two of my most fave characters ever! All faves aside, I like angsty stories, and I always imagined Remus dying first... Unconventional, I like it. Awesome story you got there. Report Review
aww sad :( but very nice :) Report Review
Oh my gosh! That was AMAZING! Don't look at me... I have tears going out of my eyes...
But really! The writing was fantastic! Aw. At least they died knowing their Teddy would be ok!
I especially like the part where Tonks was describing the 'good conditions of dying' (that was the only part where I didn't feel the need to start sobbing uncontrollably).
Well... that really was a fantastic piece of work! Keep it up!
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10/10 for making me cry! First time I've given a full 10/10, but you deserve it. Beautiful story, it makes it easier to bear, having Tonks and Remus together...at the end...but I doubt they really lingered on like that- the Death Eaters would have made certain they were done.
Their conversation about Teddy is what mostly made me cry, and the fact that their lives were fading fast, in the midst of a battle, and they are joking about Tonks' favourite man...
Thankyou for sharing your story. *wipes away a tear*Author's Response: I'm honored! Thank you so much for bestowing a full 10/10 for me!
And thanks for the constructive criticism. I thought that maybe the Death Eaters would've been so wrapped up in the battle, they wouldn't have noticed the two stragglers that weren't posing too much of a threat. But, you're probably right. It's a little bit romanticized. :D
You are most certainly welcome. Thanks for the wonderful review!!
Aw.So freaking sad! :-(
I always thought JKR should have given them a death scene, but I probably would have bawled like a baby if she did. I cried enough when Fred died, I don't know if I could have handled Tonks and Remus too. :/
~Nikki~Author's Response: Yes, I cried too when Fred died! It was soo sad! And if Tonks and Remus had a death scene, I would've certainly sobbed!
Thanks! Report Review
One word: Amazing
LONG LIVE REMUS/TONKS!!!Author's Response: Wow! Thank you soo much! I love to be....well....amazing!
Long live Remus and Tonks, indeed! Report Review
that was so sad!! =[
poor remus and tonks. You wrote this story really well.
10/10.Author's Response: 10 out of 10? YAY! I'm so excited! Thank you very, very much!
And yes, I agree, it was extremely sad. Report Review
Not bad, but a little short on detail. It assumed that Remus was injured fatally as well but doesn't say that. You should put something in there that says that.
Nicely written nonethelessAuthor's Response: Thank you. I will try my best to edit something in like that. Report Review
*sniff sniff* so sad
but good. =)Author's Response: Oh! I'm sorry you're sad! But happy you read it and happy you think its good!
Thanks! Report Review
wow, i loved this annie! good jobAuthor's Response: Thanks, Jules!
Very sad and well written. It's good to think that before they died they knew the war was won, and that Teddy would be safe.
Keep writing.Author's Response: I know, I don't know what made me write something so sad! Usually I write funny, light-hearted stories, but this one just kind of came up!
Thanks for the encouragement! Report Review
that was really well written good jobAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Loved it! Beautifully scoped and written! Absolutley wonderully amazing!
10/10Author's Response: Scoped...Hmm. I think I'll use that word sometime.
Thank you for being my first reviewer for this story! And thanks extra for the great compliments! Report Review
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