sweet and sad. It really shows what a great writer u are.Author's Response: Thank you very much. :] Report Review
This story is so sweet!*tears* Maybe thats why Alice had placed a gum wrapper in Neville's hand when he went to visit her in St. Mungos. She had remembered him.after all.Author's Response: Perhaps! I'll leave that up for you to decide; obviously only JK Rowling knows the true answer, but I do like to think that part of Alice at least recognizes her son. Report Review
"'I put one of my gum wrappers inside it,' Alice added softly with a watery smile before letting herself fall into a somewhat peaceful slumber."
I absolutely love the way you ended it. This is a very sad, somber story, but it was very real to me. I could see Alice Longbottom doing something like this, and the gum wrapper thing kept her canon, so kudos!
Thank you. ^_^ Report Review
This is WittleAna from the forums.
This was great. It was very sweet and touching, and I like how you included both Alice and Frank in your story. I especially liked Alice's last line (with the gum wrappers) because even though it was a serious story, there was still some... joking undertone? I don't exactly know how to describe it.
Thank you very much. :) I'm glad you enjoyed! Report Review
This is a very sweet story, one question, why did she put a gum wrapper inside the letter? I understand that Alice gave Neville gum wrappers in St. Mungos but what is the purpose of doing it in a letter?
Other than that, this is a lovely Story!Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
I was making a connection to the gum wrappers she gives him in St. Mungo's so that there's a reason for their special meaning to Neville. :) Report Review
Very gentle and sad. This is well written. I like the idea of Neville having a letter from his parents, in view of what happened to them.
Keep writing.Author's Response:
Thank you very much. :) I'll definitely keep writing, no doubt about that. Report Review
Aww, this is soo sad. I have to admit, I've always been intrigued by Frank and Alice, and this was a lovely fic. I think you really captured the kind of people they'd be, and it was so sweet, in a sad way. 10/10Author's Response:
Frank and Alice are my very favorite pre-Hogwarts ship and I hadn't written them, so this came out of it. :) I'm glad you enjoyed! That means so much to me. ^_^ Report Review
An interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Oh, I like the part about the gum wrappers. :)
~ BonnieWritterAuthor's Response:
Thank you very much. :) Whenever I write about Alice, whether it's an RP or a story, I always like to include something about the gum wrappers. :) Report Review
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