I loved this... and the first one, short, but sweet. Great writing, your story's shall keep me amused for days! Report Review
That was adorable!! James deserved that punch for taking Sirius' advice. The one-shot before this was a bit sad but it was good and the two stories fit well together. Poor Lily though, Alice is a good friend. Loved the story! Report Review
i'm glad they are alright now. great story this one.^_^
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That was so cute. What a stupid, stupid idea. Ugh! James is so stupid to have dragged that out for so long.
This was such a fitting sequel. It flowed on really well. Adored it.Author's Response: Yeah, James really isn't the brightest in this. But he's a teenage boy, and they do blunder alot of times. So do teenage girls. But its good he realized his mistake. I agree, poor Lily. :(
I'm glad you thought it was a fitting sequel - my first time ever writing one with this story - thank you very much! :) Report Review
AHHH yay they got back together that was cute and im happy!Author's Response: Yes, they did! I couldn't leave Lily and James mad at each other. I luff them too much to do that. :) Thanks for another great review! Report Review
I love that James realized he was a prat.Author's Response: Thanks! I figured that it was about time James started figuring it out. Report Review
aww this is sweet stupid James, taking advice from Sirius.
Gld he wised up.Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda picture James to be out-of-it and mischeivious, but still a sweet, caring person underneath his tough exterior. He's the guy every girl would want to date... As long as he never, ever takes advice on romance from Sirius again! :P Thanks for your reviews! Report Review
i luved it!!!i felt bad while reading the first part but this made up for it amazing!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the end of this story!! Thanks for the review! Reviewers rock my socks! Report Review
I have to admit, after your other one-shot about this story, i was left feeling a bit depressed. however, this second part made up for it! it was sad but touching and happy as well. i love how Lily punched james before crying into his sweater, it was unexpected and pretty comical. I love this story!Author's Response: I agree, the other one-shot was quite depressing, and I think that's because the emotions behind it were very real. :)Personally, I like stories better where I can really feel and connect with the main characters, so I try to incorporate that into my writing. I'm glad you thought that this chapter was happier. I see James as a somewhat less serious character, so it was easier to incorporate funny bits into his point of view.
Hehe, I'm glad you liked the little fight with Lily and my story! Thank you so much for reviewing!! Reviewers like you rock my socks! :P Report Review
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