I love the backstory of their /first/ kiss.
the hospital wing for three days bit made me giggle, and the ending made me grin like an idiot.
keep writing! Report Review
yeah nothin cud be more true...luv is beautiful...esp wen its betn james n lily!! Report Review
A few typos, but very cute. :D
imagine_the_magic Report Review
Aw, serious fluff points there.
This one was very sweet, and very well written, the double narrative worked really well. Good Job!Author's Response: Thanks for the fluff points, I will be sure to use them wisely. Also, thanks for the lovely review, I'm glad you like it. :) Report Review
aweee. so cue. i loved all the emotions you wrote. so detailed. and also its was very cute with both of theirs friends saying different things. like that they dont like eachother and the other saying you like eachother. im sad that this is over. over all really good
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"I wasn't trying to glance at Ja...POTTER...I mean POTTER!!!"
Aw, this is sooo adorable... I really love it. Thay're so cute!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! I always love getting them!! I also love writing Lily's thoughts...I don't know why, but I do. Thanks again for the comment...
~Nikki Report Review
loved it. i loved the way you changed from Lily to James, but continuing with story. Report Review
awww soo sweet, James and Lily are soo cute togeather.
10/10Author's Response: I know. I love James/Lilly!!! I could write/read them forever...JKR should really write a book...or a hundred about them...Hehe! :)
Thanks for the Review!!!!
~(Celtic Princess)~ Report Review
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful.
I LOVE YOU! (jj)
xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I always love hearing what people think of my stories! :) I'm glad you like it!! Report Review
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