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Review #1, by Jebus Chapter One

2nd August 2009:
Ginny is a real b**ch(haha cant ban me :p), and i like it! The pace of the story is kinda fast, i think if you slowed down a little, added a twist and some drama(besides Ginny going america all over Hermies ass) you could make the story even better.

anyway, keep up the good work and update soon

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Review #2, by crazy4fred2 Chapter One

4th June 2008:
Sorry it took so long to review!

I like it, even though I'm not much of a Harry/Hermione fan. It could use a bit more description here or there, but almost every story needs that.

You should also probably show someway a change of scenes, like timewise, to make it a little less confusing.

Sorry again, and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, always better late than never! This story definately needs some polishing, but I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #3, by Miss Haggan Chapter One

19th May 2008:
oh this is brilliant you should deffinatly write more
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll be writing more soon!

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Review #4, by apAidan Chapter One

8th May 2008:
an interesting H/H twist. Ron certainly seems to be taking things calmly. It'll be interesting to see how the story progresses with this change. Nicely written, please continue

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thought to make things easier in this story Ron doesn't have a problem with Hermione being with something else. This is different for me because I love Ron/Hermione. I'll update soon.

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Review #5, by Weasleys Forever Chapter One

8th May 2008:
Well written. "The heart wants what the heart wants", and there is no logic or reason involved.

Ginny and that Weasley red hair, what a temper.

Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, i
ll update soon.


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