This one was an awesome story. Gud dude! I liked it even more than your other love stories. Thanks for offering such a wonderful story to the readers. Keep it up!!!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
WOAH! Intense! Good story, though!Author's Response: Thank you. I needed a different style of writing for this one. So I decided on an intense story. Report Review
good story. I like the plot idea and your writing's awesome! keep it up!Author's Response: Thank You. I might be writing an AU story to this. I'm not sure yet. Thank you for your review. Report Review
Wow, that was so beautiful, and sad. I really loved it, thanks so much for writing it! I really like that you had Lily and James plan to have another baby. I almost cried at the last paragraph! Amazing job 10/10Author's Response: Oh julvett, thank you for the inspiration. I was practically crying as I wrote it. Thank you for your wonderful review. To be frank, this was my first James/Lily story. I might make a sequel not following the series. Just to see what could happen. If you liked this, check out some of my other stories. Report Review
awww that was so cute and sweet!! :] i loved it!!
but who is the model in your banner, shes PERFECT for lily, don't you think?Author's Response: thank you for reading. I haven't had a review in a long time. I'm not sure who the model in the banner is. But I agree with you, she is perfect for Lily. My banner maker, dormiens, found the picture. Report Review
another wonderful story you really can write romance beautifully. I loved it even though the end was soo sad the last few lines were really well written, even though I knew it was coming I still felt really emotional
JemAuthor's Response: Hey Jem,
thanks for the review. I, myself, was actually a little emotional at the end of the story while writing it. I've worked endlessly on getting emotion into romance and tying them together (thats the hardest thing I've had to do with my Dramione fic). Thanks again. Chat soon.
Ashleigh Report Review
aww this is sweet, the part where Harry grabbed James' hair and glasses made me smile.
10/10Author's Response: thank you. That was one of my favorite parts to write. Report Review
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