A really good story. In the words of a country singer: "I like
it, I love it, I want some more of it!! Report Review
love it so sweet update soon pls Report Review
The story goes a bit longer on
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The chapters are put together a bit different so pick it up at the end of chpt 7
Love this ff Report Review
very nice story, please wfinish it. Report Review
I would like to see this finished along with the other ones, when will that be. Report Review
You know, this is such a good story. It's a real shame that you have abandoned it. Please, pick it up again, and continue with it. I have been waiting, and hoping for an update for so long.
It's too good a story to simply walk away from. Please, come back to it.
Robert Report Review
Are you ever going to finish this story, or have you given up on it?
It's really a good story, and I'd like to see it completed.
How about it?
Please, pick it up again.
Robert Report Review
this is very interesting Report Review
I hope you are feeling better soon and can continue the story.
I like what I have read so far.. Report Review
Cant Wait For the next chapter,
lolololololol knocked out there teeth by 2 dentitists
100/100/100/100 Report Review
I really have enjoyed this story so far. Are you planning to continue it? Report Review
please continue love itAuthor's Response: Hi I'm glad you like this one, more to come. thanks for reviewing Report Review
Woah, I think that owl resembles the one in my story...
Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one, I need something to distract me from exams.
H.R.Author's Response: Hi thanks for the review, I will try to update soon. Report Review
baby brother!! hedwig!! i love this line : “I know what love is now Hermione, and I love you.” a map to find his presents. sounds like a hermione thing to do. also fun for kids. dudley is stupid, but he's also young. and it's not like he could really internally realize it was wrong. not if he lived with it his whole life. can't wait to see what happens next to the greatest witch, especially now since she has no more memories, well almost.Author's Response: Hi, I am hoping to be well enough to get on with my stories very soon, hope you dont mid the wait. thanks for the comments. Report Review
your story brought tears to my eyes i and hoping that you would continue with this story i really like itAuthor's Response: Thanks for the great comment, hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Report Review
I like this A/U and with so many All-powerful Harry stories I hope thie Super Hermione story will be unique yet wonderful to read.
BTW when they go to school, I see the obvious hair to Gryffindor, and slytherin. With Hermione the heir of Ravenclaw, WHO will be hufflepuff's heir?
Oh and remember Luna's uniqueness and use as a great catalyst!
dennisudAuthor's Response: Hi again, I already have the Hufflepuff heir picked out, maybe it will surprise you. Report Review
Nice new story. Hope to see more as I see a few more chapters to read now!Author's Response: Hi again, I hope you enjoy the next few chapters, then hopefulyl you will enjoy the rest as it all unfolds. Report Review
Omg, that was deep man, very deep. Good but deep,. lol you think i think its deep. teehee.
But seriously. Great chapter. Very detailed. And i really felt Hermys pain there.Author's Response: Hi hope you like the rest of the story as it reveals itself. thanks for the reveiw, I will be updating as soon as I can. Report Review
Bravo! Normally I don't like violence... but with the Dursley's being a HUGE exception. (In fanfic verse anyway.) I love the fact that they (Vile Vermon and Petti Pewie) lost their teeth to a pair of Dentists! They had their just deserts without the aid of magic. So no Auoror team comming by and taking those memories away! I bet even if after hearing this news of Harry's upbringing the neighbours would probably still avoid him out of sheer guilt!
May I make a suggestion? Why don't they 'let/lease' the house to Remus? It would be a huge step up from where he's probably at currently. Since he tries to work in the Muggle world anyway, that could help! Albus could suggest it? It will also have Harry meet one of his Parents friends. He could hear some stories about them from him earlier.
You also answered my Dumble questions from earlier. Thanks. Hopefully he'll remember that when they do get to Hogwarts.
Since Hermione is now losing her future memories, will they still be friends with the Weasley's? Will they befriend Neville instead? Will they also be close to Luna when she makes her appearance?
Yeah! Hedwidge makes her appearance! Nice touch that she's given by Hermione this time around. Oh, that bit on the wards... you didn't say who's the 'keeper'? Will Hermione still remember that part of not 'trusting blindly authority figures'?
I'm also glad in this story they are learning magic early on again. It'll help with Hogwarts. Oh nice name for Hermione's new family member!
I also hope that you're feeling better now that you're home from the Hospital. Take care, update when you can.Author's Response: Hi, its nice to see some one noticed the little piece of irony with the removal of the Dursleys teeth.
It will be a while before Remus makes an appearance although it will be way before the canon version.
Hermione has her written memiors to help even though her memories of her previous life are fading, plus I have a little something up my sleeve where the memories are concerned.
I dont think that either Hermione or Harry are going to appreciate Ron Weasleys attitude now that they are so close, Ron could be in for a rough time at Hogwarts.
The scret keeper will be a bit of a surprise. And to end, thanks for the good wishes. Report Review
Very nice, but the grammar needs some work. Too many commas. But I understand why, since you were in the hospital. I hope you feel better.Author's Response: Hehe, seems I've been having a comma attack, maybe thats the part of my illness the Dr's couldn't fiind. Thanks for the good wishes, I am getting my energy back slowly so I should be able to write a little more. Report Review
Again a great chap. I love your story. And now they have a little brother, yeah. a have some questions. will they come in the same house at hogwarts like before or will it change? and will they meet ron and become friends with him? oh oh and i have so many other questions but the most important one is: when will com the next chap?
I hope soon, because i can't wait to read it.
ps: sorry for my bad englishAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review, your English is not so bad, sorry but I can't answer your questions (Hermione would kill me if I gave away her secrets)lol Report Review
YAY! They have a cute little brother! Will he be a wizard?! Excellent chapter, Merlin!Author's Response: There will be a few more surprises soon, hope you can stick around for them. thanks again for taking the time to review. Report Review
Hermione's fading memories are a nice touch, letting her live more in the present. I was wondering when Hedwig was going to make an appearance. The train trip to Hogwarts should be an interesting one, looking forward to reading your take on it in the next couple of chapters. All in all, a very good read and looking forward to seeing how they progress. Nicely writtenAuthor's Response: Hi thanks for the review, there will be a coulple more chapters ready quite soon. hope you enjoy them. Report Review
*Laughs* Oh Hermione's a very cleaver on to do what she did! Will they tell Dumbledore of said meeting with the Goblins and the Dursleys? All I can say is at least he's not attempting to 'obliverate' (sp?) the Grangers on Harry. So who will be the 'keeper' of the password? Her parents or herself? Does Hermione know Occlumency?Author's Response: Old dumble draws is just a tad frightend by Hermione and her power. hehe, I like the idea as for the rest that will all be revealed as we move on. Report Review
*Blinks* Boy you sure know how to bring on the surprises! Wonderful news for the Granger family! Will Harry continue (well thinking on it more, stupid question with what's going to happen with the Dursley's) to stay with the Grangers from now on. Yep.stupid question. What about Sirius? Will she break him out early?Author's Response: Harry will be spending some time watching his wonderful relatives leaving his house, hehehe. Report Review
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