Really superb I like how you are making this so gradual and subtle here. It really brings a stroke of reality to the story rather than suddenly being in love like many writers do. I am really enjoying how you progress through the relationship of these two characters!

Author's Response: ah, you understand what i was hoping to do =)

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I keep babbling on about cuteness. You really are spot on with how things go for the ages you write. In a way I think you've very well captured how I imagine Vic and Teddy to be and it makes reading your story all the more a pleasure!

Author's Response: i think you're going to give me a big head because you're so nice to me! but really, i love hearing what you think, it makes it worth writing =)

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lol. You really do capture the sweetness of childhood for Vic and Teddy. I am quite enjoying the read! I am just a tad confused on who said the last line? Teddy? I love how Vic can be so spiteful in a good way. Teddy's obstinate way is endearing too. I just adore how you are writing them both.

Author's Response: Yes, it was supposed to be Teddy saying that last line, but i thought it ended better without the "said Teddy" part...sorry!

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Going backwards here reading chapter 1 which is really cute. I like how he flung food at her. Babies are really good at making a mess! I like your style of writing here simple and too the point in a VERY good way!

Author's Response: i was worried about it sounding boring or unrealistic, since theyre only little, so im glad you didn't hate it! thanks!

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I happened to stumble on this chapter on it's own and never realized till today that it is part of a much larger fic. This chapter is honestly just too cute and adorable. I loved it. I read this chapter long ago and saved the content but I never could find the chapter till today! In all honesty this moment between Vic and Teddy is really too cute! It is so adorable. I can really see Teddy doing something like that to Vics dolls.

Author's Response: thankyou =) i wanted to do their relationship properly, coz theres so much more to it then just falling in love one day. im so happy you liked it!

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This is exactly what little kids are like!

Author's Response: Oh thankyou, i was so worried it would be unrealistic! =)

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HOW. FREAKING. ADORABLEEE. teddy+victoire=ANVIL LOVE. please keep writing...10/10

Author's Response: lol yay you liked it! i hoped you would =)

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eep! yayy he's falling for her :D:D:D i love this story, keep updating pleasee!! :D hahaha

Author's Response: lol that was the plan, yes. aww im happy that you like it! =)

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Haha, cute :) Teddy is, what, 15 here? It's nice that he wants to teach Victoire how to fly but I think he would've thought twice about it if he'd know what he was in for ;)
Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, Teddy is 15 in that one. lol yeah, poor Teddy had no idea haha.
Thanks so much!
x

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so cute! i agree, teddy lupin had to have been the cutest.kid.ever. hahah. vic is also really cute and innocent :) please keep writing!! 10/10...cant wait to see what they're like when she's 13

Author's Response: lol i want a kid like vic when i grow up. and ill spend all my time dressing her up in pretty clothes! lol ill write the next one as soon as i get an idea! xxx

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That - was - so - FUNNY! LOL, loved it all, keep on writing!

Author's Response: lol yay thanks! im glad you love it =D.

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Very cute story, so far! Continue!

Author's Response: thankyou, i will! =)

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hahahahaha thats what you get for messing with victoire weasley biittcchheess! hahaha :) keep updating! its amazing!

Author's Response: lol yeah i didnt want her to be just a boring little princess, so she needed to get him back =)

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OMG... this is just too cute. *giggles*

Cookies for Vic & Teddy...

Author's Response: lol i love Vic and Teddy, and they love cookies. So thankyou lots!!!

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aw :) cute! please add more soon, this story's starting out really really amazing!

Author's Response: lol thankyou, ill try and add more as soon as possible!

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and james potter is introduced! :D
please keep writing. can't wait to see what they're like when they get older.
pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update son!
also, is teddy 2 years older than vic?

Author's Response: lol i had to bring james into it somehow, coz he's just so fun =)
and yeah, he is supposed to be about 2 years older.
thanks =)

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this is sooo cute!!! i love the tone of the story. i adoree teddy and his "ever-present grin." keep writing!!!

Author's Response: oh thankyou! i think teddy would be the cutest kid ever =)

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Yes it was really good, though little kids tend to have lisps and can't pronounce their 'r's properly or their 'th's properly
great job anyway, can't wait for the rest of it

Author's Response: oh I'll remember that next time I try to write about little kids. thanks!

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Coolio!
This is cute!

Author's Response: aww yay =D thanks!

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Awesome story. This should be very interesting if they have sworn revenge against each other.

Author's Response: thanks =)

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Awww! Love it! Are you doing a sequel?

Author's Response: yup yup, more to come =)

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That is so cute, please keep writing this story!

Author's Response: i will, ive written the second chapter already, so =) im glad you liked it!

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