It was really really good...
When r u going to post the next chapter up?
xoxoxoxoxoox Post Soon xoxoxoxoxooxAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure. It's not abandoned, but right now I'm working on another story, but there will be more. Report Review
Sorry it's taken me so long to give you this review you requested, but I've been very busy!
Okay, so I'm going to be a bit critical, but hopefully constructive at the same time! It was a bit short - I think you could have been slightly more descriptive, but not too much more because nobody wants to be sufficated by the descriptions of people and what they're wearing! But maybe we could have been introduced to Lauren in a better way, or to Albus and James. Also, maybe someone has already said it, I think Rose would refer to her mother as 'Mum' rather than 'Mom'.
Try not to put A/N's in the middle of the text. Some people might find it annoying.
I think you have a good start here! I generally don't read Rose/Scorpius stories. I really like that Kreacher is in the story. He was cool - I like him more than Dobby!
well done! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review, I really need to work on my writing. Report Review
Damn. This is a good story. Report Review
update soon love the story Report Review
update soon can't wait what james jr has to say about this good work with the story Report Review
i think you need to work out your details.
the plot is fast paced and barely understandable, since it jumps to other scenes. Report Review
great chapter, didnt matta that it was
short i really liked it, especially Scorp
being in Gryffindor lol
it was good cant wait for more, just a small
note you spelt peeves, peaves lol i liked the
quip about being Rons daughter and luving food
keep writing Report Review
This is Farnia!
Oh you will?! Really?! THANK YOU!
Here the link for the one I did. It sucks... T_T The only program I could use was Paint.
I dont know why, but I cant post URLs here. So if you could, please go to photobucket.com and then type farnia-2007. Thats my account. The first picture there is the banner. Author's Response: Okay. I'll go to photobucket right now. Report Review
okay I'm hooked. I love the how you made scorpius so shy and charming. please hurry with a new chapter! Report Review
still a little short on the detail.
Good thoughAuthor's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be longer. Report Review
I love your story so far...
Could use a little more detail, but still good.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
u cant make the characters fall in love in the first chapter... now i tottali cant be bothered to read the next one..
especially with rose scorpius.. helo theyre supposed to hate each other.. uve already got conflic. use it
u kinda killed it.. there already got their first date planned..Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. As for killing it, I can do it if I want. Report Review
I love the ending! Happy news for Rosie!!! >.<
Erm, I was wondering if you could make me a banner for a story I just started. Yours is pretty amazing and, it be wicked if you could make one for me too.
Answer in the Authors Response? Please??Author's Response: Thank you! This is supposed to be a story of how Scorpius is so much different than Draco. Sure I'll make you a banner! Report Review
OMG! luv dis story, really good
funny and interesting lol
luved it plz read my storiesAuthor's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure how people would like it, but I guess you do! I will definately read your stories. Report Review
It's good =)
Write more, I want to know what happens next! =DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm writing chapter two now. Report Review
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