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Review #1, by charlottetrips It's like I'm not me....

15th March 2012:
You have a definite handle on emotions and really pulled me into the conflict that Ginny found herself faced with. I could feel her turmoil and was swept away with it. She didn't know what was happening but knew that she was somehow connected and the resulting guilt was real to me. You picked out an apt song to go with this because I could totally get where she was coming from in terms of the addiction she felt.

There were spelling and grammar errors which I'm sure you could see if you came back to this one day. Also, there is a format issue her everything, not just the song, is italicized.

But even those bits weren't enough to pull my attention and admiration for what you wrote out in this story!

xChar

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