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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by hermygirl08 Finding out

29th July 2011:
love the story, please conitune!

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Review #2, by hockeyluva16 Finding out

20th May 2011:
i want to read more! this is such a good story!

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Review #3, by Aaabi Finding out

11th February 2011:
are yiu gonna write anymore?

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Review #4, by tkcemma Finding out

29th May 2008:
fantastic but plz write more soon
ps the only reason u drop marks is cos u keep me waitin for more

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Review #5, by tkcemma Finding out

28th April 2008:
brilliant plz write more

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Review #6, by Miss Haggan Finding out

26th April 2008:
good but a bit short and rushed plz update soon

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Review #7, by Harrysgirl35 Finding out

26th April 2008:
Hm.it seems good! But,merteratiy is maternity. But please update soon!10/10

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Review #8, by Little_miss_potter Finding out

26th April 2008:
Hello, for your first validated fanfic (with the other one in validation) i have to be honest and tell you that there were a LOT of spelling errors and typos, for example, "merteratiy" is Maternity, and "Minestry" is Ministry. I suggest getting a beta who will iron out the kinks and the spelling errors, also try to make the chapters a little longer- it always draws my attention.

Anyway, all said and done, i would like to know how Lily is alive as well as Sirius! Ok, i will keep an eye out, i hope you take my advice into consideration!

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