love the story, please conitune! Report Review
i want to read more! this is such a good story! Report Review
are yiu gonna write anymore? Report Review
fantastic but plz write more soon ps the only reason u drop marks is cos u keep me waitin for more Report Review
brilliant plz write more Report Review
good but a bit short and rushed plz update soon Report Review
Hm.it seems good! But,merteratiy is maternity. But please update soon!10/10 Report Review
Hello, for your first validated fanfic (with the other one in validation) i have to be honest and tell you that there were a LOT of spelling errors and typos, for example, "merteratiy" is Maternity, and "Minestry" is Ministry. I suggest getting a beta who will iron out the kinks and the spelling errors, also try to make the chapters a little longer- it always draws my attention. Anyway, all said and done, i would like to know how Lily is alive as well as Sirius! Ok, i will keep an eye out, i hope you take my advice into consideration! Report Review
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