Will Hermione's and Snape's Patroni be the same? Will they both be does? Or will Snape's be a vampire like the one Hermione saw?
Oh, and the accent you made up for Tonks makes her seem a little stilted and distant, not like in the books.Author's Response: Okay. Well I appreciate the comments. Report Review
Now it's time for Hermione to get new lips. She was kissed by an old geezer and the swamp thing, among others.Author's Response: Now, now.its just a story.lol. Report Review
You really know how to throw in twists and turns! Snape warned Peter, who tattled to Voldemort? Dumbledore meddled with time twice, and didn't manage to assassinate a little boy once?
But I must admit, Dumbledore's got some big rocks! He put the investigation in his impending assassination into the assassin's hand, and doesn't expect an imminent death. That's either guts, or pure stupidity.Author's Response: Well I think Dumbledore knows things that no one else does. But you may be right. Thanks for leaving a review. Report Review
Draco's proposed? What will Lucius say?
Hell, if Snape finds out it'll be a race against more than time.Author's Response: Glad you're keeping up with the story line. Hope you are enjoying the story. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Ooh, brave! Apparating away from Snape! Report Review
I'd be stunned if he actually let up on Harry. Hell, I'll be stunned if he doesn't attempt to make Hermione disappear at least once.Author's Response: Don't trust him at all do you.lol. Well I think the story has a few twists that may surprise. I have 15 other full-length stories on another fan-fiction site. If you find this one interesting you might find others you like as well. Report Review
I normally disagree with people who think Snape can be redeemed, but the idea of a doppelganger assassinating Dumbledore is just too interesting.Author's Response: Thankyou. I'm glad you are intrigued. Report Review
That was really great, I loved it!Author's Response: Very glad you liked it. Appreciate that you left a note to let me know. Report Review
very good beginning. very Hermione in her thought process as she rationalizes what she must do. looking forward to seeing how this will play out. nicely doneAuthor's Response: Thank you. Sorry it took me a bit to respond I have been gone a week. I shall post another chapter immediately. Report Review
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