{reviewid: 2680069, reviewer: 'Jen'}
2nd April 2012:
Please, continue this story!
I absolutely luv your summary!
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{reviewid: 2680062, reviewer: 'Jen'}
2nd April 2012:
That's a really good way to start the story off. I like the last sentence of this chapter the most. 'And just to make it better, she screamed.' Absolutely Brilliant!
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{reviewid: 2565640, reviewer: 'Someone'}
9th August 2011:
Um... everyone's totally OOC and the storyline's hard to follow. explain plz
Author's Response: Yeah! SUPER OOC!
I wrote this when I was 13 and I'm prolly gonna take actions to get this beta'd by someone. Since I really don't have time to go through this my self.
Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2554390, reviewer: 'Misty_Dreamer'}
25th July 2011:
Lalala commenting on my own story is fun.
but kinda lonely .
Author's Response: Hahaha I cant believe I'm responding to my own review!
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{reviewid: 2520459, reviewer: 'Hannah.'}
12th May 2011:
Ok, that was so cool. Did you really come up with all that when you were thirteen? and that story just spoke to me. You are an angel.
Author's Response: Yes! I came on here after a long while and realized that I had written this story 3 years ago! Ha, I just had to post it again and see what people thought of it. I'm thinking of re-writing it though (i believe i can make this much better)
thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2460024, reviewer: 'chickoftheblackroses'}
5th January 2011:
please continue the story this is really good.
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{reviewid: 2418652, reviewer: 'georgie'}
1st October 2010:
LOLFEST! UTTERLY HILARIOUS
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{reviewid: 2416354, reviewer: 'Hannah'}
25th September 2010:
In spite of this stories' weirdness, I am quite enjoying it. When Hermione asked for the strawberry pudding at the end of the chapter, I laughed from about 2 minutes.ahh the looks I got from my sister. Great work!
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{reviewid: 2392628, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
Fugly dress burning time! Great chapter!
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{reviewid: 2392627, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
Its been my life's dream to swim in a huge pudding cup.
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{reviewid: 2392624, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
OH how the tides change! This is an odd comedic melo-drama!
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{reviewid: 2392619, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
TANK YOO FOR WRITING THIS WITTY STORY!
Author's Response: TANK YOO FOR READING
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{reviewid: 2392612, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
He should have taken the shirt off for good measure!
Author's Response: Exactly! Who needs clothing anyway?
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{reviewid: 2392611, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
How the magnificent Dr. M comments on his own life!
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{reviewid: 2392606, reviewer: 'EmpireAndAll'}
10th August 2010:
SUPER LOLS! This had me sniggering the whole time! The eyebrow part too. And she noticed him by his smirk!
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{reviewid: 2303492, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
interesting dialogue, kinda like ur a movie director n he's an actor complaining about it. N Draco hated tht SO much!! Omg, haha! It was funny and sweet how he told the truth...but, idek.
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{reviewid: 2303480, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
I wonder how his parents feel that he's engaged to someone whos not a pureblood..awkkward too tho. I hate that old lady...hahah.
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{reviewid: 2303474, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
? When did they get divorced??!!?!?!?? Didnt he seem so concerned about her and loving a day ago? (Minus the Imperio...)
Author's Response: They got divorced in chapter 5.5 which i hadn't posted because it was a filler.
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{reviewid: 2303472, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
Continue! Why would Krum do that? Even if he wanted the baby...
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{reviewid: 2303465, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
What'll happen when he finds out that it's his? What about Viktor?
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{reviewid: 2303460, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
I didnt like this one to be honest, you need more in it...it's like a different version of the 2nd chapter so early in the story. My favorite was chapter 1.
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{reviewid: 2303454, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
Good job, nice chapter
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{reviewid: 2303448, reviewer: 'hogwartsgoddess'}
24th February 2010:
OMG! Wow! Hermonie must hate this in the pit of her stomach, and maybe scared...
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{reviewid: 2299276, reviewer: 'Mintis'}
15th February 2010:
Wow! draco's point of view is really funny here... LOL!!! cant stop laughing when hermione proposed a marriage to him! splendid! LOL!
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{reviewid: 2294278, reviewer: 'HOLEY%20like%20a%20SAINT'}
4th February 2010:
interesting plot line.
the beginning went by really fast and was sort of confusing, lol especially with the baby after 5 years thing...see, there's this thing called science and...well... yeah...
But you found a way to explain it somehow, in a sort of plausible way. There seem to be some holes in the story with unexplained things but maybe thats the way you wanted it.
Anywho, I'd like to see how it ends. Poor Draco. I really hope he doesn't become suicidal on account of those dresses. I'd miss him too much.
Keep working on it! Maybe try to add some more description? I dunno what else to suggest.
Cheers.
Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism
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