wow this is totally different and i like it Report Review
Very good opening chapter with amazing plot possibilities. Well written.
How long can they justify to themselves what they are thinking of as comfort and recreational sex, without getting involved in all types of jealousy and recriminations when they both try to establish other relationships? Why in the world wouldn't they think of continuing their own relationship? Probably because they are busy denying it.
See how much I have thought about this first chapter. Imagine how much I will think about further chapters.
Keep writing. Report Review
bring on the complications. you've set a very interesting plot here, how long will the two of them be able to rationalize what they've done and try to go back to the lives they had? It's going to be interesting to see how living in close proximity at the Burrow is going to effect things. Nicely done, looking forward to reading more. Report Review
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