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Review #1, by AndrinaBlack Disenchanted

13th August 2009:
That was very well written and I enjoyed it! :) I expected the solution to be something like that he was too stressed out or something along those lines, so I was surprised by the end. I really felt sorry for Harry too and could imagine how he felt. There were also some funny moments. I loved it how he thought he was under an invisibility cloak and then looked like he just had pulled a normal hood over his head. :)

Author's Response: Hehe, I giggle everytime I re-read this story.. I can't help it! And YES the part with the cloak wsa one of my favorites too ;) I'm glad you enjoyed this story and that I was able to surprise you at the end :D
I look forward to more reviews from you in the future!
~MooN~


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Review #2, by harrylilyjames Disenchanted

17th June 2009:
haha- poor Harry.
I can't see him crying about it- probably get pissed off about not being able to do any magic, but I wouldn't see him cry.
But it was a good one-shot- kind of had a feeling it was going to end like that, but I'm grinning while writing this..it was good =]

Author's Response: LOL, I don't know why but Harry always seemed a bit whiny to me when things didn't go his way... not as whiny as Ron, but still...lol. I think in this case the whining stemed from pure panic and desperation. In my mind all systems just shut down when Harry realized that he had no defense...lol.
Either way I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the review :D

~Moon~


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Review #3, by miss_ravenclaw09 Disenchanted

1st June 2009:
Hahah! This was great!

This reminds me of the old soap opera Dallas, where they killed off one character, but decided that was a bad idea, so they brought him back and told everyone that the previous week had been a bad dream. Man, I was so like, "how is this going to work?" and I think the dream at the end makes it sort of humorous. Poor Harry though. That would be scary if he had no magic, not just for him, but for everyone. :/

I'm not really sure if I have anything really constructive to give you, but I can tell you I did enjoy this story a lot. I, at first with the door thing, thought it was going to be an OOTP fic, you know with the Department of Mysteries thing, and then I thought it was going to be a fic where Harry goes sort of crazy and there actually is no magic when he had his cloak on and everyone could see him. I like this idea much better than any of my assumptions! :P

Awesome job! :)

Angela

Author's Response: LOL, I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. It came together so randomly that I wasn't sure how it was going to turn out. I was litterly sitting in my english class one day (was supposed to watching Othello...lol.. but I've seen it a million times) and I started writing. By the time the class was done I had the entire story writen out in my notebook, and was sitting there giggleing to myself. I had my eanglish teacher read it (she loves my fan fics and read most of them when I was in her class.. and has even checked out my stuff on here) and she loved it. So i went home, edited it... and here it is. LOL. It's honestly so much lighter than most of my stories I'm still not really sure where it came from..lol. I think it's the result of too much coffee and not enough sleep.

Once again thanks for the wonderful review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Much Love
~Moon~


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Review #4, by dracoslover1 Disenchanted

16th October 2008:
Very good story. I like how you made the dream seem real. The descriptions and characterizations were extremely good! I enjoyed the story.

Author's Response: YAY! haha. Thanks for the compliments ;)
I actauly had my english teacher read this one and she liked it and told me it reminded her of an old Benny Hill skit ;) I really ejoyed writting this one, just kinda came to me in one sitting ;)

Thanks again
~Moon~


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Review #5, by Laiquendi Disenchanted

12th October 2008:
This one-shot was very well written and everything was so well described that is was really easy to visualise the scene! I really felt for poor Harry & he was absolutely right to be worried about going back to the Dursleys, thought I can't imagine Dumbledore ever allowing that to happen...but when you think you've just lost you're magic, you're not going to be thinking straight!! Liked the little twist at the end too! LOL!
~Lai.

Author's Response: YAY! Thanaks for the R&R I'm so glad you liked it. This was one of those random stories that just kinda hit me out of nowhere and i wrote it all out in under an hour... funny how that happens...lol
~Moon~


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Review #6, by sunshinedreamr Disenchanted

27th May 2008:
I'm sorry I've been such a sucky reviewer lately. But I'm back! haha. I really liked this one-shot. The idea that Harry had lost his magic was so completely original. I have never read a fanfic with the same concept, so kudos to you on coming up with a unique idea. And it seemed very realistic. Everyone was in character, and Harry's worries seemed very real to me -- his biggest worries being that he would have to go back to the Dursley's and that he would have no defense against Voldemort. You have a very good view of Harry's character. Good job. And of course, I loved the little twist in the end as well. :)

Author's Response: Hehe.. so happy that you finally got a chance to read it... and even happier that you liked it. :) I think the best past of writting this story was everytime Harry's head hit the table I swear I could hear the "thump"... LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter of The M Word!

Much Love
~Moondanser~


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Review #7, by meerkatalex Disenchanted

15th May 2008:
Good idea! 9/10 from me, and I like it so much I will give you an invisible cookie!

Author's Response: LOL *eats invisible cookie with some invisble milk* Thank you. So glad you liked it!
Much Love
~Moondanser~


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