u r actually doing a great job with this story. keep it upr. here is a tip, when u start out u should try to mention that the only reason harry and draco fight is because of Draco's father. Draco used to hate harry, ron and hermione because his dad does. u need to let the readers now that Draco doesn't want to be like his father anymore. u need to let people know why he is changing his attitude tword everybody.Author's Response: Ok, I'll try and work that in next time. I alredy have a few chapters done, i just have to wait for the thing to validate. Report Review
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