Ooh I loved the ending! At first, Rose was just blabbering on about cookies and rules about them and how they should be hot...and I was just like, "Wait...what?" But then she started to talk about Hogwarts and Scorpius came into the picture. It was very funny when she licked Scorpius's hand because she thought it was a cookie! But I do not know if Hogwarts allowed MP3 players or Ipods there. :/
But the very last part was very good, how she connected back to the beginning and went full-circle. Great word choice! :] 9/10.
~EstrellaAuthor's Response: Aw, Thanks. The story is actaully set at home, not at Hogwarts, I didn't actaully explain it too well, but I am going to go over this story again. So, Thanks so much. Report Review
That was great. Licked his hand! I almost pissed my panties at that one. I like that Rose is a 'rules' person; she comes off as someone like that. You so could have made this longer, but that's okay. I loved it.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks, I actaully wrote this story whilst eating cookies, and I have the same rules as Rose. It inspired me. I have a new Rose fic coming out if you want to read it. I'll love to know what you think of it! Thanks so much for the reveiw :) Report Review
Really cute piece, well written. Good one-shopt.
Keep writing.Author's Response: Thanks, and thanks for keeping a eye on my work it's nice to have a continual reveiwer. So cheers :) Report Review
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