You're really great.
That's special, and you're definitely one of my favourites!
(NOTE: I might make a song-fic of one depressed kid at Hogwarts, and I was wondering this boy should be named. Do you have any suggestions?) Report Review
I don't normally have a liking for songfics or short stories, but I really liked this one. Even if it is sad.Grr Harry/Ginny, they ruin everything! Ha. :)
There weren't that many mistakes I could see, except for the one bit Hermione says: "Are you sure you don't wanna come?" I think she would say, "want to" instead of "wanna", but that's not that big of a deal. I also think that depending on the relationship she has with Kristi, she might be a bit more concerned for her (because that's just how Hermione is).
Overall, pretty good. I know it was supposed to be short, but I'm curious about learning more about Kristi's personality and how/why Harry broke up. I gave you a 9/10. :) Report Review
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