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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by emoticon18 Stacks And Stacks Of It

14th February 2011:
could you continue it please? i loved it!

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Review #2, by MUSC Stacks And Stacks Of It

11th June 2008:
Wow, that was sad... but well written

Author's Response: aww thanks xx

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Review #3, by MoonyandProngs Stacks And Stacks Of It

17th May 2008:
That was great! I loved it!

Author's Response: thanks

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Review #4, by Kira Laiana Jackson Stacks And Stacks Of It

9th May 2008:
It needs more fluff tooo drastic its ok though

Author's Response: ok thanks

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Review #5, by Emma Stacks And Stacks Of It

1st May 2008:
This is really, really good! well Done! =] I really think u need 2 write another chapter. This could be 1 of the Hr/H stories that could acctually work! Good going!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much but its a one shot
i might write a sequel in the near future but i need to update some of my other stories!


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Review #6, by lovette Stacks And Stacks Of It

28th April 2008:
please continue love it

Author's Response: erm - it was meant to be a one shot but i might do a sequel??

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Review #7, by shade_of_lovely Stacks And Stacks Of It

27th April 2008:
umm...
That was fairly interesting, considering that it's less that 1000 words. Work on character development, even in a one-shot and watch minor spelling/grammar mistakes. I can't wait to read more of your work!

Author's Response: oh yeah - thanks for reviewing - i was in a rush with this story i just had to get it all out

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Review #8, by auror_snape Stacks And Stacks Of It

27th April 2008:
The grammar leaves something to be desired, but I'm nuts over Harry/Hermione. I don't see why she would like Ron, he keeps putting her down. 9/10

Author's Response: thanks

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