oh pretty please update soon! Report Review
ello lovely girl...great news! im a trusted author!i logged on for the first time in months and got pleasantly surprised. is eveything ok dear, as i sent ou a emaill weeks ago and no reply. i hope nothingàswrong.
great story!Author's Response: nope nothing's wrong, i don't think my email works properly.
maybe you were filtered as spam?
whatever, this whole technology thing is giving me the poohs.
later lover. Report Review
i liked it very much... m... i think i am falling for that ben guy, sounds sexy, lol.
well, well... our dear charlotte isn't that innocent, is she? shame on her!
but who are we kidding? who on Earth is innocent nowadays? :P
Good start, it's quite catching :)
10/10, good job, boss
Cheers!Author's Response: thankyou so much!
i'm glad you liked it!
it's a new story and so the first chapter is always a little slower than the rest of the story because you have to introduce most of your characters and set the scene but i'm glad you didn't say anything about it being boring or slow.
thankyou. Report Review
Hmm I don't usually read stories like this but I saw and decided to try it and I like it. It's a very good start and I want to read more.. So Update again soon please.Author's Response: thankyou.
i was very unsure of the start, it is a little slow and slightly boring but hopeffully it will get better as it goes on.
thanks for the review. Report Review
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