First off, I'd like to say that I am so, so sorry for not reviewing this for nearly a year! I completely disappeared off the surface of the Harry Potter world, so I didn't even see the response to this challenge. But, now that I am back, I think you should get a well deserved review.
First and foremost, I think the idea of James almost buying Lily medicine for Christmas was priceless. Especially with his reaction when the clerk asked what her symptoms were. Sirius's response was very witty too, and it seems like something he would definitely say. I bet he wouldn't let poor James live this one down for awhile.
This was short, but cute. Definitely humorous as well, which is usually not something I say to fan fiction writers. Good job and sorry for reviewing several months late. I enjoyed it. =) Report Review
It was very funny. Keep writing. Report Review
Cool really funny LOL
Accio Malfoy ;~) Report Review
haha only the marauders could be caught in such a situation :P
its really good! xx Report Review
this was fun, good one. Report Review
awe... i was smiling like a dork at the end. =]
It was really sweet, even though it was really short.
But i still loved it!! haha.poor james. Report Review
that was really very funny.
do write more like this... Report Review
He he! dat was funni!
keep writin' Report Review
This is really well written, and very amusing.
Poor James. Us muggles can be very confusing!
Keep writing.Author's Response: Hehe, we are aren't we!? I'm sure that if I was stuck in their world I'd be just as confused though. Report Review
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