Loved it! Luna is my absolute favortite
character and we share so much in common. Report Review
Aww that was really cute. I love Luna she is great. I would believe everything she said tbh just to learn more about her mind lol. Anyway this is great. Well written too.
Emma :) Report Review
MERLINS BAGGIEST Y-FRONTS! I finally found a story where the main pairing is Dean/Luna! 'Course, I've only been looking for 20 minutes, but I am not a patient person! I love this, but I do think Dean is a bit OOC with the big-headedness. I still loved it, though. Report Review
a very cute and very humorous one-shot. nice work, hun. Report Review
Ooh this is terrific! Dean/Luna fics are never heard of but they should be because they are great =]]. I love the ending when he is stuck with Romilda Vane underneath the mistletoe; seems like he can't get the right girl=]. Look foward to reading more stories! Report Review
WHY don't you like this!? It's good! Report Review
haha, it was cute- but Dean seems to be a bit ooc, you might want to put than in a side note at the beginning- because in the books he doesn't come across as being good-looking with girls chasing after him or big-headed in any way.
Also, the parts where you spoke for yourself kind of irked me a bit...I don't know why- they just did.
But you wrote Luna wonderfully, I could really picture her...good job!
7/10! Report Review
Hahah, that was really cool. I personally love Dean/Luna. This story was really light and funny and I really like it!
I love the idea of Dean being super popular. And Seamus! Oh, poor Seamus, that was perfect :)
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I like that story! It iss cute. I think Luna and Dean would make an intersting and awsome couple. Your story was really good to read.Author's Response: Aw! Yay! Thank you! I love Dean/Luna too. ^_^ Report Review
This was such an odd one shot lol, but in a good way. It was cute and funny, I really enjoyed it. I liked the way you wrote Dean, he was a bit into himself but not so much that the reader wouldn't like him. His reactions to Luna were great! and she's such a lovely character.
Nicely done!Author's Response: Odd, but in a good way? Well, thanks? I think? :P Yes, thank you. ^_^
It makes me so glad that you like my impressions of canon characters, as they're so much harder than OCs because you have to try and be like J.K. Rowling, which is practically impossible. :P
Anyway. Thank you for your lovely review! Report Review
This was a funny yet slightly odd oneshot. I just love the way you write Luna in your stories too. You've written her so well its amazing. I just love how you've stuck to her personality so well. Ive tried writting her but its so hard. You've done an amazing job characterisaing her as well. Absolutely brilliant, seriously!
Deans characterisation is great too. He acts like I'd imagine him to the particular time this story is set - Sorta up himself? I like it. Though I cant help but find the idea of him being friends with Luna a little amusing. Its still good though -I just love strange things ;D
I just love how hesitant Dean is to kiss Luna and how he has too. Thats really funny XD Its kinda OCD like, eh? But because of the way you've characterised him (as this kind of 'I'm awesome and everyone loves me sorta person) it works out! And I just love how he gets stuck with Romilda at the end. That was totaly funny XD
Yeah, great one shot with a great ending! I just love how confused he is. I was confused - But were talking about Luna here. Shes unpredictable! Report Review
Very cute! I think I reviewed this one before, you know, the crash. :( But I can't really remember what I said. Probably a lot of squeeing at the cute lines, and the gorgeous...well, Dean. And you know, it was just...love. I just...love you. *dies* Srsly. *tacklesquishes* A few minor minor sentence structure problems, but otherwise FABULOUS! Seriously, I love you, I do.
MajaxxAuthor's Response: -dies also- YAY! WE'RE DEAD TOGETHER!
well, I died because you are way too nice to me. seriously. WAY too nice. P:
I love you too! Report Review
I really enjoyed this. Totally cute!Author's Response: Awww! Thank you Box_of_souls! Report Review
About time I stopped for this, eh? Let me tell you, you surprised me! When I said the ship, I was totally expecting you to write a really fluffy post DH piece, but this is totally original. The idea of the mistletoe trap is SO Dumbledore and Hogwarts, I adore it! And Luna's jullyfrugs reaction was priceless. As for the ending - I don't even have words it was so hilarious! A brilliant, brilliant comic piece, especially considering the timeframe! xxxAuthor's Response: About time... :P
And I wanted to write a fluffy post DH...but then, I couldn't. If you know what I mean? Eh. You won't. I don't either. :P
The Mistletoe Trap...It's so NOT cliche, right? *coughs*
And the Jufflyfrugs? It took me an hour to think up that name.
Thank you SO much, Andy, dear!!!
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Like. Very much!!!
I give FIVE STARS!!!Author's Response: :)
Thank you very much.
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oh geez, that was funny and cute.
Luna didn't even realize that Dean likes her...Poor Dean. jk
I really like this...Is it a one-shot? I hope you can write more.
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PLEASE CONTINUE!Author's Response: Yeah...just a one-shot. I might write some more Dena though. Fingers crossed! xx Report Review
Haha. Poor Dean. Me likes. Luna is great =)
Cookie please =)Author's Response: Yes...Poor Dean. Thank you!
And which flavour cookie? We have chocolate...peanut butter...any! Report Review
Oh gosh! FLUFFITY FLUFF FLUFF! ^^ That was the cutest story I had read in a while ^^ great job, 8/10 ^^Author's Response: FLUFF INVASION!!!
Bamuahaha. I'm glad you liked it. :D Report Review
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