Very good story. I like the descriptions of the park that come through in memories instead of just physical attributes. Great job! 10/10 Report Review
very nicely written. I'm not familiar with the song, but the story is very Harry-ish in his more thoughtful moods. the scenes are very nicely painted for the reader and it's an interesting bit to think about, how does the world see those who make things possible. Nicely done.Author's Response: It was an impulse write so I'm happy you thought it was well written. I just reviewed it and caught some mistakes though. :( It is Harry, I just wanted to see how obvious I could make it without saying his name. Report Review
I really like this piece. I gather it is from Harry's perspective. It is good to see the significance of Dumbledore to Harry. I love the lines "The struggles of being a man. The responsibility of being a father. The memories of being a hero."
Absolutely brilliant. Congratulations.Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it. Yes, it's from Harry's POV. Thank you! Report Review
Not bad.needs a little more detail, but not bad.Author's Response: thanks. :) Report Review
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