This was a beautiful one shot...I love the imagery of Ginny sitting and watching the sunset at the Burrow and using the time to reflect on how things have changed for the better following such a painful time. This is a great song for them for sure.
Nicely done, my dear!Author's Response: Danielle,
Thanks so much for reading and for the lovely review! The song has always been one of my favourites and it took on new meaning when I was listening to it after book seven. Ginny's little tale just had to be told, it was a story that wouldn't leave me alone until it was written down. ;) Glad you liked it!
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I LOVE HARRY/ GINNY STORIES! And I love this one. I like the way you're subtle in the way you describe what Ginny is feeling, but still manage to make it concise and non-corny. (lol)
I enjoy "reflective" stories, because I think the characters are the most interesting past of a story, and it's nice to know what they're thinking!
10/10 xxxAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks so much for the review, hun! I'm glad you enjoyed it and you didn't think it was corny. :) I agree, characters are indeed the most interesting part of the story, otherwise it would be a documentary. :P Characters are the human element we can relate to. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing! --Mac Report Review
That was awesome! The song goes perfectly. Bravo.Author's Response: Thank you so much for thinking it was awesome! *claps giddily* Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
awww that was really sweet, good job! 10/10Author's Response: Hey, thanks for checking it out and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, I was taking a bit of a leap at the fluffy song-fic :) Thanks so much for the high rating too! *hugs*
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Well I have to say I'm not normally a fan of song fics, and yours is only the second one I've finished. At least this time I knew the song and the artist. But having read your other story, and knowing how well you write I gave it a go.
I was not disappointed either. That was a beautiful, well written, short piece. I know what you mean about an idea getting stuck in your head and then having the need to to write it out - that's partially what got me started on my H/G story. Since I started it, another idea has taken a hold of me, and now I know I'll have to write it too. Oh Well!
I really admire your writing style. It's fluid and natural. Very easy for the reader to immerse themselves and get lost in the story - which is of course primarily why one reads fiction. Well done! I look forward to your next chapter in your other story. - MAuthor's Response: Wow, now that's what I call a review! :) I know what you mean about not being a fan of song-fics, I often stay away from them myself. Sometimes, though, I hear a song and it just sticks in my head and reminds me of a certain ship or character and I feel it needs to be written down. It's funny how it works that way. I haven't written a song-fic or been compelled to do so since I used to write JAG fanfiction.
Your words are just too kind. I find myself looking forward to your reviews! I'm working on typing up the next chapter of my other story, hopefully my day job doesn't delay it too long. :P Thank you for reviewing!
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super. Great one shot. I don't know the song off hand, but your flashbacks through HArry's and Ginny's time together was really nice.
definitely a feel good story.Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know what you thought! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Report Review
absolutely lovely fluff!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the positive feedback, I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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