Aw that's so sad.Lily was taken away from Sirius by James.though I do not know if Sirius would hold a contempt or bitterness towards James, as you sort of imply as Sirius "grits his teeth" and all.
Also, this part:
She just happened to be in his line of view nearly constantly, usually scribbling ntoes down or pushing hair out of those startling, emerald eyes.
I think that "ntoes" ought to be "notes." Do not worry, mistakes happen to everyone!
I loved the way Sirius desribed Lily, and how he said that her laugh was music to his ears. It was all very sweet and sad at the same time. 8.5/10. :]
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I Love love love Sirius/Lily fics, and you write them brilliantly!!
(I love the bit about Crocodile Dundee! Made me laugh!)
And you Sirius was really good! I liked him!
(And Lily, of course!)
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This was a really nice story. The characterization seemed spot-on, and the story flowed very nicely.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm always worried about how my Sirius is. Thank you. Report Review
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