This story sounds like a great story to read.
Please write more of it?
Thanks for taking your time and hard work on this story.
RATING: 10 / 10Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Report Review
a couple of quibbles. I'm not certain about the eye colour of the assassin since the camouflage on the face is usually more than one colour to break up the pattern of a face, it's not really defined. Your young cellist was, most likely a prodigy, though she could also be a protege. I'm not certain where the story is going, other than a dying Lucius things are a bit nebulous. The mystery index for your beginning is very strong, which is good, but maybe a bit more of a hint as to where it's heading?Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
please continue love itAuthor's Response: I probably won't post again until I have most of the story completed, but I won't abandon it. Report Review
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