I'd always made a point of never reading a Peter/OC story because I hate seeing the dirtbag happy.
But I really liked this.
I got a little bit confused when she'd woken up because just a minute ago they were about to have sex. I think there should have been a few asterixes in there for good measure or something similar.
Either way it was still pretty amazing.
:D Report Review
CARRIE! EM (letemily) GAVE ME THE LINK TO THIS FRIGGIN AWESOME STORY THAT MADE GO LIKE OMG CARRIE!!!
So yeah, amazing story, made me teary. Although I seriously don't believe Peter was really that good with...you know what. I mean, totally well written story, made me see this soft side, but *shudders* It's like imagining a stupid Hermione, you know?
Great story, love it!! :D 10/10. Keeping writing stuff that seem totally AU to me. :DAuthor's Response:
Well...-cough- it was very hard to write. :P
Then I just kinda went with it. :P
Anyway, thank you very much. :) Report Review
Aw! CARRIE! This is so good! I feel like I inspired you to greatness! I can't believe you wrote this so quickly, though; I'm still struggling with mine. Peter seems very in character, despite the fact that not many stories pair him up with a girl or give him any physical contact with a girl, so good job! xDAuthor's Response:
Poor Peter. :P
-pats his head-
Thank you. :) Report Review
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