oh dear, if they hear what i think they do it will not be good! i was kind of hoping no one would find out they were from the future though, would have been more fun when/if they slip up

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WRITE MORE ITS AWSOME!

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Ooh!! Drama, drama.
Update soon please!

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Woah, amazing. Just leaving this review so I remember to come back to this, =)

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dun dun dun. .. . kool chapter. .. update soon cant wait to see what happens next!

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oh wow looks like the cat is going to be let out of the bag.

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Nice. Funny, surprising, interesting twists in the plot, and great characters (even if most of them you don't own). I like this, please update soon! I must read more...

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truthfully, i'm not reading more, that was boring.

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Ok that was pretty good. I'm going to read more before i say to much.

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I think that this is going to turn into a great story. I always love the time travel stores, and I think you have a great start

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HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!
I NEED TO READ THAT CHAPTER! I'M SO EXCITED!

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I love this story. Everything about it from him having a secret sister (by the way great name, Christina, everyone always thinks of stupid names.) to the whole time travel concept. I LLOOVVEE time traveling. It's just SO kool! Great grammar, by the way. I always try to give some advice, but I can't think of anything. Don't feel bad, I've never ever given 10/10 on the first chapter.

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dun dun dun . . . stupid weddings . . . i hate them too . . . well good chapter . . . entirely too short but good . . . make the chapter longer next time . . . update soon

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hey, good start, i liked it. . . the only thing i would recomend is parts of the story repet, fix that, other than that like ure story and please update soon

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