{reviewid: 2745539, reviewer: 'Wolf25'}
11th October 2012:
I do hope that you continue this story it's one of the better ones that I have found not to mention funnier ones. please continue looking forward to the next update
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sorry for the wait. I'm glad you like it.
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{reviewid: 2744516, reviewer: 'onorus'}
7th October 2012:
Just wanted to remind you we're still patiently waiting for more story! Which in retrospect is a bit unfair, given that I'm also waiting on at least two other stories of yours to update, and you can only do so much. Regardless, I enjoy your writing, and thought I should let you know that.
Author's Response: I'll get on it as soon as I can. I'm truly sorry for the wait.
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{reviewid: 2735409, reviewer: 'he-who%20read-an-awful-lot'}
28th August 2012:
why kill all of the weasleys to quote you
"Dumbledore never figured out what could have happened to ruin the plan he and Molly Weasley"
killing molly i can understand but ginny (newborn) Ron (1yr's old) the twins (3yr old's) percy (5yr's old) and bill and charlie (dont know how old) for no good reason, i dont see angelic beings arranging for the death of
Author's Response: They didn't arrange for the deaths of all the Weasleys, but they had to get Molly, Ron, and Ginny out of the way. They just altered events so Voldemort accidentally Apparated into the Burrow right before the Weasleys' arrival. I'm sorry you don't like it.
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{reviewid: 2499639, reviewer: 'LauRawr'}
27th March 2011:
please please please continue soon xx
Author's Response: I'll try, but it might not be until summer when I get the next chapter written and posted.
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{reviewid: 2480284, reviewer: 'Aaabi'}
14th February 2011:
Please say there's more chapters on the way? This story is brilliant! It's definatly the best story I have come across.
Author's Response: There's more coming...eventually.
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{reviewid: 2448062, reviewer: 'interested%20reader'}
10th December 2010:
Is that all to this story? Or is that all you have written so far? I like the story very much. Thanks for the good read. I also like the way you added the back ground story of Chronos and Odin.
Author's Response: That's just all I've written so far. I've got writer's block.
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{reviewid: 2434028, reviewer: 'Dallas'}
11th November 2010:
I really like your story. The only part i dintlike was that Hermione kissed him good-bye after talking at Ollvanders. Its too fast and tha wouldnt really happn. She also wouldnt be snuggling with Harry in the carriage when they havent even kniwn each other that long or been going out. Plus she wouldnt agree to some type of future dating deal. I love how Chronos is involved. I dont like how he is working with saints. Normally i would say choose greek mythology or christianity. Don't merge,but you make it good. So overall your only flaw is that you are making Harry and Hermione get too cozy TOO fast, but its only the second chapter. I'll withhold my judgement. 9/10
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Normally they wouldn't be going so fast, but Chronos decided to move things along.
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{reviewid: 2427212, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
23rd October 2010:
mythological smackdown 10 dont miss or ull wish u hadnt been born
Author's Response: Correct. It won't be graphic, but it'll be there.
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{reviewid: 2427149, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
23rd October 2010:
THE JACKASS turned into a jackass hm isnt that a band?. oh wait thats just snape nevermind
10 of 10 just for thaT scene
Author's Response: Thanks! That was one of my favorite scenes to write.
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{reviewid: 2417498, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
27th September 2010:
ok get the next one up pronto so i can continue to laugh at the misfortune of the grease ball and have my fill of h/hr
Author's Response: I'll get it up as soon as I can, but school keeps me busy even on the weekends. I'm glad you like the story, though.
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{reviewid: 2417465, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
27th September 2010:
and now u finish the circle with setesh i was wondering when egypt would play its part
Author's Response: Yeah, most ancient pantheons appear in this story.
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{reviewid: 2417400, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
27th September 2010:
the talk isnt evil and yes kids today have the internet and health class damn u health class u ruined my life
Author's Response: Yeah, I still have nightmares of my teacher's "little black box".
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{reviewid: 2417321, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
27th September 2010:
i liked it and i was actually wondering how u were going to get harry on the team with the no 1st years rule since everything in harrys life seems really good now
Author's Response: I will always find a way to do that, never fear.
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{reviewid: 2417310, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
27th September 2010:
great job on the chapter i like how u introduced harry with hermione and all that jazz
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2417292, reviewer: 'williamy98'}
27th September 2010:
very good chap i agree with the mythological characters but next time if u mention them in another story do some serious study on them chronos wasnt just roman he was greek to and odin was norse and anglo saxon just try to give the credit where its due is all im saying other than that great job
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. I appreciate it.
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{reviewid: 2401012, reviewer: 'hogwart_lady'}
21st August 2010:
the phrase hes an honorable man is from lord of the ring therodan said that to ewoyn in return of the king
Author's Response: That is one use of the phrase, yes, and I believe it's also talking about Brutus, or someone else from Caesar's era.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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{reviewid: 2288371, reviewer: 'Malfoie'}
23rd January 2010:
Wow non stop laughing in that chapter it was great, but I do have a question. I understand that Hermione had seen or had something done to her... I assume that it was Snape, but we all know what happens when one assumes something... I know that her Bogart is Snape... So how can she be all brave and stand up to him for Harry and prank him then turn around and cower from him the next second... Its just inconsistent... Still great story keep it up.
Author's Response: She stands up to him when Harry's with her or she perceives him as a clear and present danger to the one she loves. But she is always scared of him. Thanks for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 2288271, reviewer: 'Malfoie'}
22nd January 2010:
Note about Author and Editor note... I know what you mean now a days theirs sex ed in middle or elementary school and THE INTERNET were one can find all the info one could ask for and a hole hell of alot they never did.God bless the internet.. Great story I just don't want to stop.
Author's Response: Actually we had it in high school, and our teacher taught us a lot of stuff we never wanted to know. And that's the polite way of saying it.
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{reviewid: 2288119, reviewer: 'Malfoie'}
22nd January 2010:
As long as you can get Colin past his weird gay stalker tendency's he is a fun character to use and have around. Great story I know I did not post in a couple of chapters, but it was just to fun to stop.
Author's Response: Yeah, Colin's great if you can get him past the whole stalking thing he had going.
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{reviewid: 2288012, reviewer: 'Malfoie'}
22nd January 2010:
Is this change in Dumbledore for real or is he just trying to manipulate his way back into control of the Potters. Or is he really a nice guy and is just a Dimwit. Time will only tell. Great story.
Author's Response: He's a nice guy, just seriously misguided. And the memory charm didn't help matters why it was still in effect.
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{reviewid: 2288009, reviewer: 'Malfoie'}
22nd January 2010:
Well in all honesty third year would be the best time for them to really start dating when they can go to Hogsmead on the weekend and have a proper DATE.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm glad you understand. Then they can date up until they graduate, and within a couple of months they can be married. Perfect, right?
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{reviewid: 2288005, reviewer: 'Malfoie'}
22nd January 2010:
I first want to say great story so far. You could have ended it write their as a one shot, but I'm glad that you did not do that and chose to continue it.
Author's Response: Well, of course. I usually plan longer stories.
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{reviewid: 2287521, reviewer: 'shubham'}
21st January 2010:
please upload the next chapter soon. Until now the plot of story is perfect and it is really good.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll submit the next chapter soon.
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{reviewid: 2285461, reviewer: 'Wistful_Stargazer'}
16th January 2010:
I got quite a chuckle out of Chronos and Odin cheering Harry and company on in their endeavor to utilize their "Do-It-Yourself Plague Kit" on various people such as Snape, DumbOldDork, and McGonagall.
It was too funny that they were all horrified by the idea of having found DumbAsADoor and McGonagall in bed together; not to mention poor Hermione vomiting at the mental image.
=)
Great story--well done--keep up the good work!
:D
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes people just need a little bit of divine guidance. And Chronos and Odin are more than happy to cheer on Harry and the gang when they pull something like that.
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{reviewid: 2284591, reviewer: 'Wistful_Stargazer'}
15th January 2010:
It was rather quick the way that they figured out the diary; at least they didn't have to mess with the basilisk, hey?
Well done--keep up the good work!
:D
Author's Response: Oh, they'll still finish off that overgrown lizard. You know, just for good measure.
And yes, Harry is quite brilliant.
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