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22 Reviews Found

Review #1, by CarrieBeth We got to get outa this place

31st December 2011:
I love it!!! I envy your writing skills! I hope that someday, my fanfics could compare to your's, even if it's a small comparison. Anyways.MORE PLEASE!:)

Author's Response: Wow, I haven't validated a chapter here since 2008... I can't believe when I come on here looking at things in retrospect I find a review just over a month old. I'm really glad you like my writing. I need to get my act together a bit in my opinion in both writing style AND continuing stories. I love your enthusiasm. I have to tell you though that I may not write much more of this story. Uni and all that. I have had about 3 and a haf years writer's block. But I'll try :)

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Review #2, by CarrieBeth Here comes the sun

31st December 2011:
I love it! you are a great writer. I wish my fanfics were at least half as good as yours! you are so so so great! Did I already say that? well...yeah. thanks for writing this:)

Author's Response: Thank you so so so much for your compliments they mean a great deal to me :)

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Review #3, by Gemma Burning Love

14th June 2008:
Aw, poor Mary, falling down the stairs like that, headache's stink! and the blacking out, definently not good! How badly did she hurt it? I always do stupid stuff like that around my friends and try to down play it. I'm just that clumsy and I guess Mary is too! last time I think i broke one of my toes at the beach. I really LOVE this story because Mary is so relatable. We've all been the outsider who wants to fit in at one point or another. Keep up the awesome writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! So much! You always say the things I want to hear about this story...

Ahaha I have some of these things happen to me too so I can relate to her as well. Although - I haven't fallen down a set of stairs - yet!

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Review #4, by 65ashben Burning Love

13th June 2008:
Awww that has got to hurt. So she fell down the stairs and then fainted. Wow. Another great chapter. Can't wait for more!! :)

Author's Response: Thankyouuuuuu - yeah that would really hurt... next is Mary's visit to a muggle hospital... :D

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Review #5, by Gryf_Queen Here comes the sun

24th May 2008:
Haha I like it alot.. Love the bands that you put on here... I love the Rolling Stones also... Great start and I can't wait to read more.. 10/10

Author's Response: *dances* yes I do like a lot of seventies songs. I also am trying to keep it in the period music... you know sixties and seventies muggle music of the time... :D

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Review #6, by marieluz Here comes the sun

24th May 2008:
please update soon!!!

Author's Response: yes I shall as soon as the queue opens and I have finsihed the next chap... :D

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Review #7, by marieluz All You Need Is Love

24th May 2008:
this story now on my favorites!


Author's Response: REALLY!? Yay! :D

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Review #8, by marieluz (I can't get no) satisfaction

24th May 2008:
the rolling rocks? haha

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah I liked that bit too... :P

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Review #9, by marieluz Born to be Wild!

24th May 2008:
oh no... poor mary

i wonder what sirius is gonna request...

Author's Response: ehehehehe wouldn't you like to know...

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Review #10, by shabby Here comes the sun

23rd May 2008:
okay so i'm a little confuzed...
mary is in her 5th years?
sirius, james,peter,remus,f&f are in their 7th year?
lily and alice are in their 6th year?
sorry but i'm sorta slow...
great storry so far tho :) ;p
and dont ever give up cuz u think ppl dont like ur story...they might be just lazy and not review.

Author's Response: noooooo they are all in 5th year... hmmmm i should clarify that in the next chapter... yes I should. Thank you thats really nice advice of you...

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Review #11, by horsenut8 Here comes the sun

22nd May 2008:
You don't sound "pompous"! Anyway lovely chapter and and can't wait for the next chapter, although they could be a bit longer if possible!!:)

Author's Response: I did sound pompouys :P ahahaha I should make it a little longer shouldn't I hmmm... I shall try :D

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Review #12, by 65ashben Here comes the sun

22nd May 2008:
Oh this is such a great story. The chapter was awesome. Can't wait for more!!! B)

Author's Response: thankyou! :D I can't wait to post the next chapter!

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Review #13, by emocut_or_blackrox Here comes the sun

22nd May 2008:
update pleaz
(is this short and sweet enough?!!!.lol!)

Author's Response: Yes very short and very sweet... :)

(you realise your brackets are bigger than your reviwe right? right.)

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Review #14, by Gemma Here comes the sun

21st May 2008:
Oh my goodness, I LOVE it! i'm so glad Mary finally has some friends that aren't imaginary or barmen. I thought the part about mrelin's sexy black lingerie was hilarious! I have a feeling i might have to add that one into my vocabulary, it was just that great1 But, the best part by far was mary's inner monologue! As someone who was just ranting to her friend's about the commentary that goes on inside her own head, it made me feel slightly less freakish to read about someone else who has an inner monlogue inside their head, hahaha! please keep up the amazing writing, i want to know what happens at Lily's house and what Sirius is going to do about getting punched (hilarious by the way!)!

Author's Response: I have that problem too! And I can't wait to find out what happens in Lily's house because I haven't written it yet! I must get cracking. Thank you for the lovely review... it has been my favourate one so far... :)

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Review #15, by lollipop_marauderette Here comes the sun

21st May 2008:
good for her.. i still hate sirius


Author's Response: ahhhhh but will you always????

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Review #16, by lollipop_marauderette All You Need Is Love

21st May 2008:
awww poor mary.. stupid sirius


Author's Response: Yeah I know I know - Sirius is a serious jerk at the moment...

No pun intended.

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Review #17, by lollipop_marauderette (I can't get no) satisfaction

21st May 2008:
go mary!! scorin friends.. yay


Author's Response: ahahaha go mary...

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Review #18, by lollipop_marauderette Born to be Wild!

21st May 2008:
hey this story is really good!! you might want to write a better summary (though I have no room to be talking) so more people read.. i like mary already.. she seems cool


Author's Response: ahhhh there is that.

I have just figured out to get a banner on here (took me a while) so maybe I shall make a better summary.

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Review #19, by Gemma All You Need Is Love

19th May 2008:
Once again, I loved it! Thank you for the shout out, i feel special1 your story is amazing, especially the beatles' song title, i love that song! I feel so bad for Mary! I find it interesting that sirius sees right through her act. even though it makes her feel bad, it's sort of proof that he does pay attention. saying that, he was a bit of a jerk to her. go mary for punching him! i really, really want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter! update soon, please, the suspense is killing me! Awesome writing!

Author's Response: I love that song too!!!!! Yeah Sirius is a jerk right then... but I dunno hmm I may make him a less of a jerk later...or maybe not...

Sorry about the suspense *grins evilly* you shall have to wait a lil longer mwahahahahahaha

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Review #20, by horsenut8 All You Need Is Love

18th May 2008:
Guess What?.
I LOVED your story!!!(yay!!)
I can't wait for your next chapter and I only just read your story for the first time, because otherwise I would have already reviewed!!:)

p.s I hope this makes you happy!!

Author's Response: It does! I am sorry about the pissed-off-ness that came out but I really like my story and I was hoping other people do too!! :D Thankyou for reviewing!!!!

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Review #21, by Gemma (I can't get no) satisfaction

6th May 2008:
Once again, i love it! Especially the rolling stones, i grew up listening to them (my parents loved them)! And how Mary talks out loud when she doesn't mean to, it's hilarious! poor her though, having to eat lunch at the leaky cauldron every day! At least now she's got Lily and Alice. Keep up the awesome writing and please update soon!

Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked it!!!! It's my first OC/minor character story so.. yeah ^^ *squee* thanks :) another Chap is coming up ...

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Review #22, by Gemma Born to be Wild!

27th April 2008:
Haha, awesome chapter! I really want to know what Sirius has to say! This story looks like it has the potential to be really amazing, so keep up the brilliant writing!

Author's Response: thank you :) I will - next chapter is on the way... :D

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