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Reading Reviews for Looking in from the outside
11 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Accio Malfoy On the Outside Looking in

12th February 2010:
Ah bless Snape it's so sad i love the title and last line !!!

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Review #2, by cobaltsapphire On the Outside Looking in

27th May 2008:
I really enjoyed your story, it was simple but really well written. I usually dont like 1st person stories that much but i think you did a great job. Keep writing :)

Author's Response: Oh thankyou ... I don't normally either...but i started writting before I relised and I just thought oh well...I'll see how I go...



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Review #3, by Silver Spazz On the Outside Looking in

25th May 2008:
This is a wonderful story!

Author's Response: thank you soo much for the feed back

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Review #4, by xox On the Outside Looking in

8th May 2008:
Wow, If that was your first fan fic then I am extremely impressed.
Most stories i read are really detailed, but that was just a simple story. But in a really good way. It was a bit sad too.
I would definetly recomend you continue writing stories

Author's Response: thankyou sooo much....I was aiming for a simple effect...


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Review #5, by DeathMakesArtists On the Outside Looking in

7th May 2008:
Aww that is sooo sad! ;_; poor Severus, I hate that his story is such a tragic one. ;_;
Anyway, this was quite good for your first fic. Maybe some teeny weeny punctuation errors, but really nothing major or distracting. And maybe you could've made it a little bit longer, but as I said for your first fic, it was quite okay. :)
Keep writing! :]

Author's Response: thanks...I tried to make it a bit longer.... but i couldn't keep the same effect if i did so i decided not to....


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Review #6, by tiger_lily On the Outside Looking in

6th May 2008:
aww so swe-eet. make it better? i dunno it think its... yea PERFECT

Author's Response: Ohhh...thank you sooo much


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Review #7, by express On the Outside Looking in

25th April 2008:
Sup. Want a banner for your story? I know a place where you can get them. Simply email me at yjoana@yahoo.com (:

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Review #8, by Severus my hero On the Outside Looking in

19th April 2008:
Oh my god, I loved it though i did not really understand the holding hand A/N. could you please ellaborate what you meant by it?

Author's Response: Sure... It's meant to say "holding her hand" (AN: i dont mean physicly) I just musnt of done it right.
Thanks im gald you liked it

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Review #9, by luvlunageorgefred On the Outside Looking in

18th April 2008:
ooohhh! that was really good.
(sniff sniff) I luv it. the end,
so heart wrenching.
Straight on my fave list.


Author's Response: I know I seem a bit strange...but I got sooo excited when you said straight on my fave list...lol...I know...Thankyou soo much

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Review #10, by harrylilyjames On the Outside Looking in

17th April 2008:
awe that was sooo sweet... but when you said '‘hold her hand’ (A/N: when I say that I don’t mean physicly)'- I think the reader gets it by the commas you put around it.
It would of been nicer if it was longer, and i know its only your first fic and everything. But to me it doesnt feel like a proper story. I dont know [probably just me being odd] lol.
but keep writing!!

Author's Response: I did try to make it a bit longer...but i jsut couldn't think of anything else...and i didn't want to drone on forever...It's not really supposed to be so much a story but just writting.
I will change the 'hold her hand bit cause i no what you mean...thanks

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Review #11, by Miss Haggan On the Outside Looking in

17th April 2008:
good fic. whohoo Lily and James 4eva hehe

Author's Response: thanks so much... I got so excited when i saw the reviews lol *hugs*

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