21 Reviews Found

Review #1, by greenbubble Christmas Wish

7th July 2014:
Hi over there! I'm here to review for the House Cup 2014 educational degree 2.

I love this little one shot on Molly and Arthur's first kiss! It is really specail and cute! Plus, Arthur and Molly are one of my absolute favourite couples so I simply couldn't resist! I can't tell you how much I love this couple and you've reallly written it well so I shall thank you for your hard work :) I like how Molly has obviously been thinking about Arthur for a while now so when they get a chance to kiss under the mistletoe, the simply have to take it. I love the relationship, it fits so well! I love the sweetness of this story - it's a nice change from some of the really dark creepy stories that you get out there. I love how they try it again and get the 'wobble'. You're such a talented writer! Don't give up is my advice.


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Review #2, by Pretense Of Perfection Christmas Wish

7th July 2014:
Hi there,

This is written for the House Cup 2014 Review, for Educational Decree Number two.

I always love a good Molly/Arthur, and this has proved no different!

I think you managed to truly capture who Arthur is exactly. The part about decorating the muggle christmas tree, it's just sometihng I can literally see him saying in my head. It made me chuckle a little bit.

I also think you did a pretty good job with Molly. I sort of imagine that she would've been the one to notice him first, since lets face it, most boys are oblivious to that sort of thing. And you definitely kept her in character, gutsy and daring. I wasn't surprised when she kissed Arthur, because it just seems like a very Molly thing to do.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, so good job there.

Pretense Of Perfection, Gryfffindor

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Review #3, by nott theodore Christmas Wish

7th July 2014:
Hello there! It's me, back again! I'm sure that you must be sick of these reviews by now but I couldn't resist when I saw that you'd written about Molly and Arthur's first kiss - they're quite possibly my favourite couple in the whole series because I think that they fit together really well and they've got a great relationship, so I loved reading about this moment! I think it was so cute to read Molly's inner monologue and the fact that she's clearly liked Arthur for a while so when she sees him she thinks that Christmas might not be so bad. And then they manage to finally kiss as well, under the mistletoe, which is a bit of a cliche kiss in fanfiction but I think it's really cute and sweet and works perfectly for the two of them! I think that my favourite parts were the fact that they had to try and repeat the kiss because it didn't go right the first time, and also your inclusion of the 'wobble' part which links really well to his little nickname for Molly that we learn about in the books. Great story!

Sian :)
Gryffindor House Cup 2014 Review

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Review #4, by hpobsessed12 Christmas Wish

30th December 2009:
Aww such a sweet story!! And the prelude to Mollywobbles is just great.

Author's Response: Thank you! I just adore them :)

(Sorry for the delay in responding!)

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Review #5, by writergirl8 Christmas Wish

4th June 2009:
AW! Too swet! Although I can't imagine Molly Weasley being shyy... 10.10 ~writergirl8

Author's Response: Haha I know. I wanted to give her a softer image for a teenager. She still possesses the fire that makes her Molly - she just hasn't fully pushed it yet.

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Review #6, by WotcherLizzieGinny Christmas Wish

30th March 2009:
I havent read a fanfiction about those two in their school years. loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! If you're interested, there are some pretty good ones of them floating around. Thanks for reading.

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Review #7, by xxDRAxHERMxx Christmas Wish

16th March 2009:
That was absolutely the cutest thing I think I have ever read. Bravo!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #8, by No_oneKnows Christmas Wish

10th February 2009:
AW! That's so sweet! It was well written as well! good job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Review #9, by Ellie Christmas Wish

26th November 2008:
'Mollywobbles!' How sweeet! On to the next!

Author's Response: Thanks! I personally enjoyed that greatly, as well.

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Review #10, by Georgia Weasley Christmas Wish

26th October 2008:
AHH! Now we know where Mollywobbles comes from! That was brilliant! I love Molly and Arthur. They just complete each other so well. This is another fantastic chapter in the First Kiss series. I am enjoying them all so much.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I laughed so hard when I read 'Mollywobbles' in the book. It was just so cute! Thank you very much for another great review :)

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Review #11, by amieharry_ginny Christmas Wish

26th October 2008:
First is first when i first read the title a huge grin spread across my face because i have never read a Arthur/Molly story and i was really excited in reading this and Merlin! This was even sweeter than i expected. *huggles*

"Molly who wobbles" How innovative and sweet. I mean they are actually cute but this story was super super super super cute. Your writing is pretty good but i found few grammatical mistakes like when Arthur says “What can I do you for?” i think you meant "What can i do for you?" You may want to check that. apart from that i loved this story. Cutest first kiss in your series so far. Million out of ten lol


Author's Response: Just like you'd never read one, I'd never written Molly/Arthur, aside from appearing in my other stories briefly. I'm so glad that for my first story with them I tackled their Hogwarts years.

I wanted to show similarities that linked them to how they are portrayed by Harry, so I included the nickname, Arthur's useless Muggle facts (about Christmas in this story), and Molly's boldness. I tried to stick to canon as much as I could :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so thrilled you're reading all my stories :D

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Review #12, by searching17 Christmas Wish

25th October 2008:
Oh my god. I loved this! It totally explains Arthur's nickname for Molly - Mollywobbles! That was genius - adding that in! Okay, I'll calm down now *takes deep breath*.

I loved the characterization of Molly, the nervousness and trying-to-think-shut-up-other-part-of-my-brain part of her really connected with who she is now. In other words, I can see her growing into Mrs. Molly Weasley. Great job on that! :]

I also loved this part:
Molly knew her brothers would give her hell for even thinking of talking to him, but that wasn’t what Molly wanted anyway.
It reminded me of Ginny and her six brothers, and how they are all overprotective of her, just like Molly and her brothers. It's very sweet.

I loved this one-shot. It's on my favorites! And I must say, I'm starting to get addicted to your First Kiss series! 10/10.


Author's Response: Your review left me feeling warm and bubbly - thank you so much!!

I'm glad you liked the nickname - I didn't think of putting it in until a bit later (after I had already started writing), but once the idea came to me I just had to add it. Molly was so embarrassed when Harry overheard Arthur call her Mollywobbles, so I invented a humorous moment to go along with an adorable nickname.

I can't tell you how excited it makes me to know that you can see her growing into Mrs. Weasley. I tried to include little bits of canon-like material that would help to suggest it, so I'm glad it worked :)

I see a connection between Ginny and Molly as well, and I have to admit that I've always wanted a brother. I just had to include them in a mention :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #13, by hanna's Mom Christmas Wish

3rd October 2008:
I loved it! And now we know how they came up with Molly-wobbles for her nick-name very cute!

Author's Response: The nickname was what inspired this one for me, so I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!!

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Review #14, by presi Christmas Wish

3rd October 2008:
awww i think this is so cutte. i cant even descrive how this story makes me feel. kind of warm and fussy :P


Author's Response: I really like this one a lot, too. It was great to write about Molly and Arthur in a different way than we'd seen them yet. Thank you very much!!

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Review #15, by cmw2 Christmas Wish

20th May 2008:
AwW!!! I loved it!
I love how you explained her unusual nickname.
nicely done! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It was her nickname that the idea for this story first branched off =) So glad you liked it, and thanks so much for reading + reviewing!

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Review #16, by slytherensangel26 Christmas Wish

29th April 2008:
wow...molly has nerves don't she

Author's Response: Definitely does!! With all those out-going children, I figured she had to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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Review #17, by jacks_angel2007 Christmas Wish

29th April 2008:
That was really sweet! Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #18, by scarlett potter Christmas Wish

26th April 2008:
i really like this story/series!!! please can you do bill weasley/fleur delacoure?

Author's Response: They are definitely on my list of couples!! Since you're so excited to have them, I'll get on writing theirs. I admit that I've been putting it off (terrified of writing Fleur wrong), but I'll write theirs soon, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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Review #19, by Flex Christmas Wish

25th April 2008:
So cute! This is a really good idea--your series of one shots about first kisses.

I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you think so. I'll be adding the next to the queue tonight!

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Review #20, by hedwig1175 Christmas Wish

24th April 2008:
Awww! How wonderfully sweet! That was so perfect! I love how you had her 'wobble'! HeeHee! :) Ok, I think I like this one the most so far. Just because I felt that way toward my husband for so long! But you said, you may be putting up Ron and Hermione's next, right? OH! I can't wait! Still waiting for chapter 12 of "No Matter What"! Great, Great work! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and loved the 'wobble' part. I laughed so hard at how embarassed she was, and knew that I had to include it.

I'm not sure if it's going to definitely be Ron and Hermione's next. I might do Harry and Ginny's - you'll just have to wait and see. Thanks again Chari!!!

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Review #21, by Lily Marie Evans Potter Christmas Wish

16th April 2008:
Yay, first to review at last! This was adorable and brilliant as usual, the way you described Molly's nerves is exactly how I've been feeling ever since I got a crush on a boy who hasn't noticed I exist yet *sigh*! Btw, which couple is next up?

P.S I liked how he called her "Molly who wobbles", now we know where the odd nickname comes from! Keep up the fab work!

Lily M.E Potter

Author's Response: Your review put the biggest smile on my face! I love that you love them so much =)

I was really excited for Molly + Arthur's, and I just had to put in the 'Molly wobbles' part =)

The next one I'll be putting up (I think.. not entirely sure yet) is Ron + Hermione's. I'm really excited for theirs, yet nervous too, because I have to do it justice. Chapter 12 of No Matter What is in validation, so in 7 days, the next installment of the first kiss series will be in.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

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